May 29, 2026
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I also finished an exam today. Hopefully, it turns out well. Recently, my senior schoolmates have been taking graduation photos, and I took pictures of them with my film camera. Also, I noticed I have only one shot left on my roll of film.
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I also, you know, as well as a bunch of other stuff I did, yeah, I finished an exam today. I also, you know, as well as a bunch of other stuff I did, yeah, I finished an exam today.
Hopefully, it turns out well. Hopefully, it turns out well.
Ah yeah me too, yeah
Recently, my senior schoolmates have been taking graduation photos, and I took pictures of them with my film camera. that I film with.
Recently, my senior schoolmates have been taking graduation photos, and I took pictures of them with my camera that I film with.
Yeah?
Also, I noticed I have only one shot left on my roll of film. Also, I noticed I have only one shot left on my roll of film.
Ah, nah…
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Cool man you should show me sometime, I think I wanna take a look at that film!
May 29, 2026
Oh hey yeah, could you take a pic of this poem and put it on your film? It’s just something I put together…
Let it be your name
This is a sentence that you will find true, because it is written to help me and you. You don’t need to make a choice, the answer is here, it’s in these words that I think you’ll find dear. What you can do and what you desire are burning like a flame, a passionate fire. The fire burns higher the more you desire, and with it, your conscience, it knows if you’re a liar.
And if you tell lies, the fire then dims, you’ll lose all your passion, you’ll know that you’ve sinned. You’ve sinned against yourself, your soul is not stained, yet you degraded your treasure, you’ve tarnished your name. Your name is your own, treat it like your soul, show it to others, share what you know.
What you know is in your heart, and yet it is closed, so open it up, and out from it truth flows. You need to be you, the choice is yours. You can do it today, want to see it grow? The fire that burns like a passionate flame, let it burn brighter, let it be your name.
May 30, 2026
Thanks!
May 30, 2026
Oh hey yeah, could you take a pic of this poem and put it on your film? It’s just something I put together… Let it be your name This is a sentence that you will find true, because it is written to help me and you. You don’t need to make a choice, the answer is here, it’s in these words that I think you’ll find dear. What you can do and what you desire are burning like a flame, a passionate fire. The fire burns higher the more you desire, and with it, your conscience, it knows if you’re a liar. And if you tell lies, the fire then dims, you’ll lose all your passion, you’ll know that you’ve sinned. You’ve sinned against yourself, your soul is not stained, yet you degraded your treasure, you’ve tarnished your name. Your name is your own, treat it like your soul, show it to others, share what you know. What you know is in your heart, and yet it is closed, so open it up, and out from it truth flows. You need to be you, the choice is yours. You can do it today, want to see it grow? The fire that burns like a passionate flame, let it burn brighter, let it be your name.
My goodness, why does this look confusing?
Wait a sec, it's not even related to what op wrote. That's weird.
May 31, 2026
My goodness, why does this look confusing? Wait a sec, it's not even related to what op wrote. That's weird.
I share the same idea with u…
I also finished another exam today.
I finished another exam today.
“Another” makes sense since you mentioned in a previous entry that you’d also had a test yesterday.
{Hopefully, it’ll turn | I hope it turns} out well. {Hopefully, it’ll turn | I hope it turns} out well.
These two alternatives sound more natural to me.
Recently, my senior schoolmates have been taking graduation photos, and I took pictures of them with my film camera.
Also, I noticed I have only one shot left on my roll of film.
I noticed I have only one shot left on my roll of film.
It’s more natural without “also.”
May 30, 2026
Thanks!
I also finished an exam today.
I finished an exam today.
Hopefully, it turnthe results out well.
Hopefully, the results out well.
This is fine, but just a little bit awkward, though that might be subjective to me. I think it's because the thing you're hoping for is about the exam results, rather than the exam.
May 30, 2026
Thanks!
Diary
I also finished an exam today.
I finished an exam today.
You didn't write anything before this sentence, so there's no need to add 'also'.
Recently, my senior schoolmates have been taking graduation photos, and I took pictures of them with my film camera.
Also, I noticed I have only one shot left on my roll of film.
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Wishing for you success 🙏🏾.
May 30, 2026
Thanks!!!
I also finishedtook an exam today.
I took an exam today.
We usually say "took" for exams in English.
Hopefully, it'll turns out well.
Hopefully, it'll turn out well.
Recently, my senior schoolmates have been taking graduation photos, and I took pictures of them with my film camera.
Recently, my senior schoolmates have been taking graduation photos, and I took pictures of them with my camera.
We wouldn't usually specify what kind of camera when we're saying we used the camera. Only when we're mentioning the film in the next sentence! :)
Also, I noticed I have only one shot left on my roll of film.
I noticed I have only one shot left on my roll of film.
Usually we use "also" when we're listing things, as opposed to explaining what happened next in a sequence of events.
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Nice journal! That's amazing, I hope your graduation is magical. Please take lots of pictures, you will treasure them in the future :)
May 30, 2026
Thanks a lot!
May 30, 2026
Recently, my senior schoolmates have been taking graduation photos, and I took pictures of them with my film camera.
We wouldn't usually specify what kind of camera when we're saying we used the camera. Only when we're mentioning the film in the next sentence! :)
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Hopefully, it turns out well.
Hopefully, it'll turn
Hopefully, This is fine, but just a little bit awkward, though that might be subjective to me. I think it's because the thing you're hoping for is about the exam results, rather than the exam. {Hopefully, it’ll turn | I hope it turns} out well. {Hopefully, it’ll turn | I hope it turns} out well. These two alternatives sound more natural to me. Hopefully, it turns out well. Hopefully, it turns out well. Ah yeah me too, yeah |
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Recently, my senior schoolmates have been taking graduation photos, and I took pictures of them with my film camera.
Recently, my senior schoolmates have been taking graduation photos, and I took pictures of them with my We wouldn't usually specify what kind of camera when we're saying we used the camera. Only when we're mentioning the film in the next sentence! :) This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Also, I noticed I have only one shot left on my roll of film.
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