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Nov. 17, 2021

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November 17th, 2021

You can see the Leonid meteor shower tonight. You may not be able to see them because of the moonlight near the full moon. However, I will try to see them while I will go for a walk early morning tomorrow. When the outbreak of the Leonids meteor shower was predicted about 20 years ago, My wife and I went to a mountaion in Nara to see them.


<p>今夜、獅子座流星群を見ることができます。ただ、満月に近い月明かりのため見ることができないかもしれません。でも、明日の早朝、ウォーキングの時に見てみようと思います。20年くらい前、獅子座流星群の大出現が予測されたときは、妻と奈良の山奥に見に行きました。</p>

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November 17th, 2021

You can see the Leonid meteor shower tonight.

You may not be able to see them because of the moonlight near the full moon.

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Nov. 20, 2021

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November 17th, 2021

You can see the Leonid meteor shower tonight.

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November 17th, 2021


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You can see the Leonid meteor shower tonight.


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You may not be able to see them because of the moonlight near the full moon.


You may not be able to see ithem because of the moonlight near the full moon. You may not be able to see it because of the moonlight near the full moon.

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However, I will try to see them while I will go for a walk early morning tomorrow.


However, I will try to see ithem while I will go for a walk early morning tomorrow. However, I will try to see it while I will go for a walk early morning tomorrow.

However, I will try to see them while I will go for a walk early morning tomorrow morning. However, I will try to see them while I will go for a walk early tomorrow morning.

the word order sounds unnatural

When the outbreak of the Leonids meteor shower was predicted about 20 years ago, My wife and I went to a mountaion in Nara to see them.


When the outbreakurst of the Leonids meteor shower was predicted about 20 years ago, My wife and I went to a mountaion in Nara to see them. When the outburst of the Leonid meteor shower was predicted about 20 years ago, My wife and I went to a mountain in Nara to see them.

Outbreak is usually for something unwanted like a disease or something.

When the outbreak of the Leonids meteor shower was predicted about 20 years ago, My wife and I went to a mountaion in Nara to see them. When the outbreak of the Leonids meteor shower was predicted about 20 years ago, My wife and I went to a mountain in Nara to see them.

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