I think I need moreto practice on English more. I think I need to practice English more.

I think I need moreto practice on English more because my learning speed is slow. I think I need to practice English more because my learning speed is slow.

Beacause my learning speed whas been slow. Because my learning speed has been slow.

it's okay to start a sentence with becuase, but the sentence needs to be a complete thought. what you have here is a sentence fragment. to make it complete, I would rewrite the previous two sentences as: "I think I need to practice English more because my learning speed has been slow."

Beacause my learning speed was slow.

Combine w/ previous sentence

I need moreto listening, more, reading more, and learning. more. I need to listen more, read more, and learn more.

I need more listening, more reading more, and learning. I need more listening, reading, and learning.

No need to repeat "more"

First, I must watch only English YouTube channels. First, I must watch only English YouTube channels.

Second, I must listen onyly to English podcasts or English songs which I can understand and maybe repeat. Second, I must listen only to English podcasts or English songs which I can understand and maybe repeat.

Second, I must listen onyly to English podcasts or English songs which I can understand and maybe repeat. Second, I must listen only to English podcasts or English songs which I can understand and maybe repeat.

Third, I must do exercises oin my book or dotake test from inters onlinet. Third, I must do exercises in my book or take tests online.

Third, I must do exercises on my book or do tests from the internet. Third, I must do exercises on my book or do tests from the internet.

Fourth, I mustn't leave writehave to keep writing in my journal. Fourth, I have to keep writing in my journal.

Fourth, I mustn't leave writestop writing in my journal. Fourth, I mustn't stop writing in my journal.

I think I mustneed to write no less than 5 or 6 sentences each time. I think I need to write no less than 5 or 6 sentences each time.

I think I must write no less than 5 or 6 sentence each time and write twice a day everyday. I think I must write no less than 5 or 6 sentence each time and write twice a day everyday.

And it'd be better to write twice at day every day. And it'd be better to write twice a day every day.

And better write twice at day every day.

To futher practice my English, I'll tell you a short story about my English teacher. To futher practice my English, I'll tell you a short story about my English teacher.

To futher practice my English, I will tell you a short story about my English teacher. To futher practice my English, I will tell you a short story about my English teacher.

He fears a spiders. He fears spiders.

you can also say "He's afraid of spiders"

He fears a spiders. He fears spiders.

When he was young, he metsaw a spiders in for the first time and ithis spider jumped on him. When he was young, he saw a spider for the first time and it jumped on him.

When he was young, he met spiders infor the first time and thiswhen he was young, a spider jumped on him. When he was met spiders for the first time when he was young, a spider jumped on him.

My teacher got scared. My teacher got scared.

My teacher was scared. My teacher was scared.

I think it was childhood trauma. I think it was childhood trauma.

I think it was a childhood trauma. I think it was a childhood trauma.

We told on lessonalked about hims vaceation during our lesson today. We talked about his vacation during our lesson today.

We were told on today's lesson about hims plan to go on vaceation today. We were told on today's lesson about his plan to go on vacation.

But after when I showed him an Australian huntsman spider he got scared. But when I showed him an Australian huntsman spider he got scared.

But after when I showed him the Australian huntsman spider, he got scared. But after I showed him the Australian huntsman spider, he got scared.

After theat he told me:, " I never visit Australia". After that he told me, "I never visit Australia".

After theat he told me: " I will never visit Australia". After that he told me: " I will never visit Australia".

Maybe I saved hims life. Maybe I saved his life.

Maybe I saved hims life. Maybe I saved his life.