Hi everybody !

Hi / Hello / Hey everyone!

l am going to medicine school.

I go to a medical school.

I want improve myself.

I’d like to improve myself.

I hope you are help me .

I hope you will help me.

If I learn English l want to go internship in London . please send me your feedback.

If I learn English, I can get an internship in London. Please share your feedback.

l’m starting

It would be good to specify what you are starting to do.

Hi everybody !

Unnecessary space

l am going to medicine school.

You could use I’m to sound more natural in the sentence if you like. The same applies with the previous sentence.

I hope you arecan help me .

If I learn English, l wcant go to goan internship in London . pPlease send me your feedback.

l s’m Starting / My Start

Hi everybody !

l am going to medicineal school.

I want to improve myself.

I hope you arewill help me .

If I learn English, l want to go to an internship in London . pPlease send me your feedback.