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What do you like to do on a rainy day?
On rainy days, I usually stay at home.
I read the Bible; although I don't fully understand everything, my heart is very calm.
The sky without the sun really makes me feel bad.
But rain is good for crops.
On the other hand, I like rainy days because the sound of rain helps me fall asleep easily.
下雨的日子里，一般都在家里。
我读圣经，虽然有些不明白，但内心很平静。
沒有太阳的天空真的让我心情不好。
不过，下雨对农作物是有利的。
另一方面我喜欢下雨天，因為雨声容易让我入睡。
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What do you like to do on a rainy day?
On rainy days, I usually stay at home.
I read the Bible; although I don't fully understand everything, my heart is very calm.
The sky without the sun really makes me feel bad.
ButOn the other hand, rain is good for crops.
On the other hand, rain is good for crops.
"On the other hand" means you are switching from one perspective (eg. the bad parts of rainy days) to the opposite perspective (eg. the good parts of rainy days). So it makes more sense to put it on this sentence, which is the start of your "good parts of rain" argument, then link the next sentence to this one.
As a summary to demonstrate what I mean: On one hand, rain causes a dark and gloomy sky, which makes you feel bad. On the other hand, rain is good for crops. It also helps you fall asleep.
So it makes more sense to put "on the other hand" one sentence sooner.
On the other hand, II also like rainy days because the sound of rain helps me fall asleep easily.
I also like rainy days because the sound of rain helps me fall asleep easily.
The "also" here helps to link this sentence to your previous sentence, as it is supporting your argument on the "good parts of rain".
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On rainy days, I usually stay at home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I read the Bible, although I don't fully understand everything, my heart is very calm. |
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The sky without the sun really makes me feel bad. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But rain is good for crops.
"On the other hand" means you are switching from one perspective (eg. the bad parts of rainy days) to the opposite perspective (eg. the good parts of rainy days). So it makes more sense to put it on this sentence, which is the start of your "good parts of rain" argument, then link the next sentence to this one. As a summary to demonstrate what I mean: On one hand, rain causes a dark and gloomy sky, which makes you feel bad. On the other hand, rain is good for crops. It also helps you fall asleep. So it makes more sense to put "on the other hand" one sentence sooner. |
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On the other hand, I like rainy days because the sound of rain helps me fall asleep easily.
The "also" here helps to link this sentence to your previous sentence, as it is supporting your argument on the "good parts of rain". |
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What do you like to do on a rainy day? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I read the Bible; although I don't fully understand everything, my heart is very calm. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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