I can't come up with a nice story, so I have to tell you guys about a very funny story someone else wrote on this platform readthat I read about half an hour ago. I can't come up with a nice story, so I have to tell you guys about a very funny story someone else wrote on this platform that I read about half an hour ago.

But I really don't know much about it. I really don't know much about it.

No Buts to start! :)

However, I think It wasn't only a great and bigthat not only was it a great piece of musical history, but also of modern art itself. However, I think that not only was it a great piece of musical history, but also of modern art itself.

great and big sounds strange.

After he had made his appearance on the stageperformed, his old teacher showedmade a breathtaking solo performance by himself to keep the show at itsa high level. After he had performed, his old teacher made a breathtaking solo performance to keep the show at a high level.

To finish off the show. Would sound better.

He drank some liquids which I don't know ofunknown liquids, (ate two pizzas!), and puked oin thea bucket on stage. He drank some unknown liquids, (ate two pizzas!), and puked in a bucket on stage.

While it'this is truly an impressive act, the author of the journal which I am referring to also made a point that the teacher was criticizsing modern society. While this is truly an impressive act, the author of the journal which I am referring to also made a point that the teacher was criticising modern society.

criticizing with a z is american so it just looks wrong to me! it's technically usable though.

In this regard, I have to acknowledge the effort he had put in to prove his point. In this regard, I have to acknowledge the effort he had put in to prove his point.

At this moment I am remembering my own teachers back at my school. At this moment I am remembering my own teachers back at my school.

It's grammatically correct but a native would say it like: Now I'm thinking back to teachers that I had during my school days.

When my school class waswe were in the 12th grade we had to makeput on a show as well. When we were in the 12th grade we had to put on a show as well.

We decided that it would be best to do some parody sketches (short actbrief performance scenes) where we showed the audience which specific habits the teachers had at that time. We decided that it would be best to do some parody sketches (brief performance scenes) where we showed the audience which specific habits the teachers had at that time.

everyone would know what sketches are so theres no need to specify.

For instance, we`ve showned how they react with the class when there was a certain inquietudedisruption or how the teachers were movingmoved their hands while talking. For instance, we showed how they react with the class when there was a certain disruption or how the teachers moved their hands while talking.

inquietude is a word i've never heard of!

Therefore we've donWe made many observations and some of them you can find online on youtube as well. We made many observations and some of them you can find online on youtube as well.

Therefore is very formal/oldfashioned and can simply be omitted.

After we've held the performance there were 2(two) teachers who were outraged. After we held the performance there were 2(two) teachers who were outraged.

In an essay scenario, you would write small numbers like two as the word instead of the digit 2.

One of them also leftwalked out of the performance hall while ithe show was ongoing. One of them also walked out of the performance hall while the show was ongoing.

The next week both werethey shoutinged at us for a long time. The next week they shouted at us for a long time.

Also, the most of the teachers which we had portrayed were excited, enthusiastic, and thrilled to have seen this. Also, most of the teachers which we had portrayed were excited, enthusiastic, and thrilled to have seen this.

excited, enthusiastic, and thrilled can just be simplified to one adjective. You could also write, most of the teachers reacted positively to our portrayals of them.

But aAll in all, there weren't any major consequences for our class, as this was the end of our school days with these teachersafter our classes had finished. All in all, there weren't any major consequences for our class, as this was after our classes had finished.

Noo Buts! I simplified the second bit!