March 2, 2025
Tokyo Vice Season 2 (116)
I finished watching the series Tokyo Vice Season 2.
It was a great story, but a little bit complicated.
Too many characters show up, and too many things happen in the story.
It was hard for me to follow everything, but still very interesting.
There was an intense scene where a yakuza boss was going to end his life.
His wife handed him a knife to end his life.
The scene was too intense and scary to see.
However, it didn't show us him stubbing himself on the screen. I'm relieved.
東京Vice シーズン２を見終わりました。
ちょっとややこしかったけど、とても面白かったです。
その話には、たくさんのキャラクターが出てくるし、いろんなことが起こります。
全部についていくのは難しかったけど、それでも面白かったです。
やくざのボスが彼自らの命を絶つという強烈なシーンがありました。
彼の奥さんが、彼にそうしろと、ナイフを渡しました。
そのシーンは強烈すぎて怖すぎて見れませんでした。
でも、彼が自分を刺すところはスクリーンに出ませんでした。良かった。
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Tokyo Vice Season 2
I finished watching the series Tokyo Vice Season 2.
It was a great story, but a little bit complicated.
Too many characters show up, and too many things happen in the story. Too many characters show up, and too many things happen in the story.
You could also write, "There are many characters who show up, and many things happen in the story." If you add "too many," it just sounds like you're saying there are more characters and more things in the story than you would have preferred.
It was hard for me to follow everything, but still very interesting.
There was an intense scene where a yakuza boss was going to end his life.
His wife handed him a knife to end his life.
The scene was too intense and scary to see.
However, ithey didn't show us him stuabbing himself on the screen.
However, they didn't show him stabbing himself on screen.
You could also write, "However, we didn't see him stabbing himself on screen."
I'm relieved.
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I remember you wrote about Tokyo Vice Season 1 last year. Did you think this season was good like the first season? :)
March 2, 2025
Yes, season 2 was as good as Season1, and it didn't make me disappointed. Some characters were really cool. I really liked one of the characters, and I followed him on Instagram lol. Thank you so much for your corrections!
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ItBETTER: The overall story arch was a great story, but a little bit complicated.
BETTER: The overall story arch was great, but a little bit complicated.
COMPARE: (1) story arch - ストーリーアーチ (シリーズ全体の要旨) (2) story -> 各エピソードのストーリー
Too many characters showed up, and too many things happened in the storyeries.
Too many characters showed up, and too many things happened in the series.
OPTION A: It was hard for me to follow everything, but was still very interesting. OPTION B: Despite the convoluted story line, it was still very interesting. OPTION A: It was hard for me to follow everything, but was still very interesting. OPTION B: Despite the convoluted story line, it was still very interesting.
There was anOn particularly intense scene whereas when a yakuza boss was going to end his life.
On particularly intense scene was when a yakuza boss was going to end his life.
His wife handed him a knife to end his life.
TheI felt that scene was too intense and scary to see.
I felt that scene was too intense and scary.
However, itFortunately, the video footage didn't show us him actyally stuabbing himself on the screen.
Fortunately, the video footage didn't show him actyally stabbing himself.
I'm was relieved.
I was relieved.
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Overall, did you enjoy this series?
March 2, 2025
Thank you so much for your corrections! I really enjoyed it!
Tokyo Vice Season 2
I have just finished watching the series Tokyo Vice Season 2. I have just finished watching the series Tokyo Vice Season 2.
It was a great story, but a little bit complicated.
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There were too many characters and a lot happening at once,
It was hard for me to follow everything, but still very interestwhich made it hard to follow everything.
which made it hard to follow everything.
There was an intense scene where a yakuza boss was going to endtake his life.
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His wife handed him a knife to end his life.
The scene was too intense and scary to see.
However, itThankfully, they didn't show us him stuabbing himself on the screen.
Thankfully, they didn't show us him stabbing himself on screen.
I'm relieved.
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You are really good, but try to connect your sentences by using conjunctions to improve the flow
March 2, 2025
Thank you so much for your corrections!
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Too many characters show up, and too many things happen in the story.
There were too many characters
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It was hard for me to follow everything, but still very interesting.
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