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maartijn

May 9, 2021

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Sentences 104: Corner The Market, Complacent, Laughing Stock

Google has been cornering the search engine market since Yahoo lost their traction.
The sales person netted in 400k revenue last year but got complacent this year and failed to secure more than 50k.
The performance of Schalke has been the laughing stock of the entire Bundesliga this season.

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July 11, 2021

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Sentences 104: Corner The Market, Complacent, Laughing Stock


Google has been cornering the search engine market since Yahoo lost their traction.


Google has been cornering the search engine market ever since Yahoo lost their traction. Google has been cornering the search engine market ever since Yahoo lost their traction.

This is a very minor stylistic suggestion.

The sales person netted in 400k revenue last year but got complacent this year and failed to secure more than 50k.


The sales person netted in 400k,000 revenue last year but got complacent this year and failed to secure more than 50k,000. The salesperson netted in 400,000 revenue last year but got complacent this year and failed to secure more than 50,000.

In formal writing, I've never seen "K" used as an abbreviation for 1000. This is fine of course in informal settings.

The performance of Schalke has been the laughing stock of the entire Bundesliga this season.


TheDue to his poor performance of, Schalke has been the laughing stock of the entire Bundesliga this season. Due to his poor performance, Schalke has been the laughing stock of the entire Bundesliga this season.

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