There awere many people there. There were many people there.

There awere many people there. There were many people there.

There awere many people there. There were many people there.

I felt even more energetic because I might be seen byin the public eyes. I felt even more energetic because I might be seen in the public eye.

I felt even more energetic because I might be seen by the public eyes.have an audience! I felt even more energetic because I might have an audience!

I felt even more energetic because I might be seen by the public eyeswas conscious that people may notice me. I felt even more energetic because I was conscious that people may notice me.

There awere several stalls too. There were several stalls too.

I think it sounds better keeping everything in past-tense

There awere several stalls too. There were several stalls too.

There awere several stalls too. There were several stalls too.

They were yummy/delicious/tasty, although a little expensive. They were yummy/delicious/tasty, although a little expensive.

I drank water from the facet in the park for free, to save money. I drank water from the facet in the park for free to save money.

I drank water from the faucet in the park for free, to save money. I drank water from the faucet in the park for free, to save money.

It was yummy toovery refreshing. It was very refreshing.

I've never heard of delicious/yummy water before. :-)

It was yummy too. It was yummy too.

You can also say that "The water was tasty" or that "The water was delicious".

Today is Sunday, and the 10k Trail Run Race is just around the corner, the next Sunday, I meaas in 7 days later. Today is Sunday, and the 10k Trail Run Race is just around the corner, next Sunday, as in 7 days.

Today is Sunday and the 10k Trail Run Race is just around the corner, th. It will take place next Sunday, I mean in 7 days later. Today is Sunday and the 10k Trail Run Race is just around the corner. It will take place next Sunday, I mean in 7 days.

The correct expression is "next Sunday"(not "the next Sunday") today + 7 days = in 7 days. Ex: The 10k Trail Race will take place in just 7 days. I must get ready for it!!! When telling a story in the past tense: last month + 7 days = 7 days later Ex: Last month I hurt my knee, but 7 days later my knee was completely healed!

Today is Sunday and the 10k Trail Run Race is just around the corner, the. To be precise, it is next Sunday, I mean 7seven days later. Today is Sunday and the 10k Trail Run Race is just around the corner. To be precise, it is next Sunday, seven days later.

When I woke up and looked at my left knee, the surface of the skin became purple. I woke up and looked at my left knee, the surface of the skin became purple.

Using "when" suggests that your leg became purple because you looked at it.

When I woke up and looked at my left knee, I noticed that the surface of the skin had becaome purple. When I woke up and looked at my left knee, I noticed that the surface of the skin had become purple.

I agree with the previous correction. Your original text sounded weird.

When I woke up and looked at my left knee, the surface of the skin became purplI noticed a bruise. When I woke up and looked at my left knee, I noticed a bruise.

It still ached when I touched ithe knee. It still ached when I touched it.

It still achedhurt when I touched the knee. It still hurt when I touched the knee.

It didn't feel worse, but the purple knee looked as though the injury was rather severe. It didn't feel worse, but the purple knee looked as though the injury was rather severe.

It didn't feel worse, but the purple knee looked as though the injury was rather severe. It didn't feel worse, but the purple knee looked as though the injury was rather severe.

It didn't feel w not hurt more than beforse, but the purple knee looked as thoughbruise made the injury was ratherseem severe. It did not hurt more than before, but the bruise made the injury seem severe.

(This is closer to what you wrote in Japanese)

Therefore, I first thought that I should not run because of my knee condition. Therefore, I first thought that I should not run because of my knee.

If I trained today, my left knee might be going to achache more. If I trained today, my left knee might ache more.

If I trained today, my left knee might be going tostart acheing. If I trained today, my left knee might start aching.

Alternative: ... might ache again.

If I trained today, my left knee might be going to achhurt more. If I trained today, my left knee might hurt more.

I have to use the Shinkansen train as well, which would (already) cost about 7,000 yen. I have to use the Shinkansen train as well, which would (already) cost about 7,000 yen.

I wondered if I should give up and defaulforfeit the race. I wondered if I should give up and forfeit the race.

I wondered if I should give up and defaulforfeit the race. I wondered if I should give up and forfeit the race.

And in the case my knee starts to ache, I will decide to defaulforfeit. And in the case my knee starts to ache, I will decide to forfeit.

And iIn case my knee starts to ache, I will decide to defaultmake the decision to forfeit (the race). In case my knee starts to ache, I will make the decision to forfeit (the race).

And in casef my knee starts to achehurt, I will decide to defaultfault the race. And if my knee starts to hurt, I will default the race.

Of course, I was very careful not to fall by the edge of the lawn/turf block. Of course, I was very careful not to fall by the edge of the lawn/turf block.

Do you mean "trail" instead of "lawn/turf block."

Of course, I was very careful not to fall by the uneven edge of the lawn/turf block. Of course, I was very careful not to fall by the uneven edge of the lawn/turf block.

this is a bit difficult to understand, but when I translated your Japanese text, it seems that "turf" is correct.

This iought it was a very good idea, I think. Thought it was a very good idea

TI think this is a very good idea, I think. I think this is a very good idea.

There is a park in thate course, or it would be better to say that thate course includehas a park, where a festival iwas being held today. There is a park in the course, or it would be better to say that the course has a park, where a festival was being held today.

There is a park in thate course, or it would be better to say that thate course includes a park, where a festival is/was being held today. There is a park in the course, or it would be better to say that the course includes a park where a festival is/was being held today.

There is a park in that course, or it would be better to say that that course includes a park, where a festival iwas being held today. There is a park in that course, or it would be better to say that that course includes a park, where a festival was being held today.

There is a park in that course, or it would be better to say that that course includes a park, wherein which a festival is being held today. There is a park in that course, or it would be better to say that that course includes a park, in which a festival is being held today.

I ran the uphill and downhill trail practice course in my neighborhood for 10k in 1:26:26. I ran the uphill and downhill trail practice course in my neighborhood for 10k in 1:26:26.

I ran the uphill and downhill part of the trail practice course in my neighborhood for 10k in 1:26:26. I ran the uphill and downhill part of the trail practice course in my neighborhood for 10k in 1:26:26.