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What I want to do before the year ends

I want to learn English at a profesional level, above all. I would also like to improve my skills in UX/UI and product design (for those who don´t know about these terms, are related about my job and studies), and I want to start going to the Gym and eating more healthy. This last thing is what has cost me the most, because I tried to be disciplined with Gym every year but unfortunely didn´t make it :(

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What I want to do before the year ends

I want to learn English at a profesional level, above all.

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What I want to do before the year ends


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I want to learn English at a profesional level, above all.


I want to learn English ato a professional level, above all. I want to learn English to a professional level, above all.

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I would also like to improve my skills in UX/UI and product design (for those who don´t know about these terms, are related about my job and studies), and I want to start going to the Gym and eating more healthy.


I would also like to improve my skills in UX/UI and product design (for those who don´'t know about these terms, athey're related abouto my job and studies), and I want to start going to the Ggym and eating more healthyier. I would also like to improve my skills in UX/UI and product design (for those who don't know these terms, they're related to my job and studies), and I want to start going to the gym and eating healthier.

I would also like to improve my skills in UX/UI and product design (for those who don´t know about these terms, are related abouto my job and studies), and I want to start going to the Gym and eating more healthyier. I would also like to improve my skills in UX/UI and product design (for those who dont know about these terms, are related to my job and studies), and I want to start going to the Gym and eating healthier.

1. “More healthy” technically works, I wouldn’t bat an eye at it, but I can sound a bit weird in some circumstances so it might be better to use “healthier” instead

I would also like to improve my skills in UX/UI and product design (for those who don´t know about these terms, are related abouto my job and studies), and I want to start going to the Gym and eating more healthy. I would also like to improve my skills in UX/UI and product design (for those who don´t know about these terms, are related to my job and studies), and I want to start going to the Gym and eating more healthy.

This last thing is what has cost me the most, because I tried to be disciplined with Gym every year but unfortunely didn´t make it :( Thanks for reading!


This last thing is what has cost me the most, because I've tried to be disciplined with Gthe gym every year, but, unfortunely didn´, (still) haven't makde it. :( Thanks for reading! This last thing is what has cost me the most, because I've tried to be disciplined with the gym every year, but, unfortunely, (still) haven't made it. :( Thanks for reading!

This last thing is what has cost me the most, because I tried to be disciplined with going to the Gym every year , but I unfortunately didn´t make it :( Thanks for reading! This last thing is what has cost me the most, because I tried to be disciplined with going to the Gym every year, but I unfortunately didnt make it :( Thanks for reading!

This last thing is what has cost me the most, becausehas been the most difficult. I triedy to be disciplined with Gymget into good gym habits every year but u. Unfortunately didn´t make it :( , I have yet to make progress. :( Thanks for reading! This last thing has been the most difficult. I try to get into good gym habits every year. Unfortunately, I have yet to make progress. :( Thanks for reading!

[This last thing is what has cost me the most] cost will probably make most people think about money instead of effort. "difficult" is clearer and makes the sentence flow better. [I tried to be disciplined with Gym every year] tried implies you're giving up, and the efforts are in the past. try instead indicates a continued struggle. "disciplined with gym" comes across very awkward, instead of the intent of discipline a more concrete goal you're trying for will sound better. I changed this to good gym habits because that is the closest to discipline in my mind but 'exercise more', 'get in shape', or 'find a good gym routine' would all work here. [but unfortunely didn´t make it] "Unfortunately" is spelled wrong. "make it" makes this feel like a pass or fail kind of thing. progress fits better because you can make a little or a lot of it instead of making it or not making it. a different clause like "It's been a struggle" or "I keep forgetting to go" would also work while also specifying what's you think is in the way.

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