Oct. 10, 2021
66 He Quit.
66 He Quit.
They had a delightful talk at the dinner. When the waiter asked them if they wanted some dessert, Kate said no. Although Toby wanted some, Kate insisted that she would not eat dessert because she was on a diet to lose weight. After they had had dinner, Toby walked Kate to her home. When Kate said goodbye, Toby didn't go. He asked to come in for a drink. While they were talking and watching tv on the sofa, Kevin burst in. He held a bottle of wine, and he was obviously drunk. Kate hadn't checked her phone so she didn't know that Kevin had quit the Manny show. Kevin began to doubt himself. He said, "what if I am not better than the Manny show?"
66 He Quit.
They had a delightful talk at the dinner.
When the waiter asked them if they wanted some dessert, Kate said no.
Although Toby wanted some, Kate insisted that she would not eat dessert because she was on a diet to lose weight.
When we say "on a diet" we pretty much always mean we want to lose weight, so this is grammatically correct but a native would be really unlikely to say it.
After they had had dinner, Toby walked Kate to her home.
When Kate said goodbye, Toby didn't go.
He asked to come in for a drink.
While they were talking and watching tvTV on the sofa, Kevin burst in.
"tv" is okay in really informal writing like a text message, but we usually capitalise it.
He held a bottle of wine, and he was obviously drunk.
Kate hadn't checked her phone so she didn't know that Kevin had quit tThe Manny sShow.
I think this is a TV show, or something like it? We'd put the whole thing in title case if so.
Kevin began to doubt himself.
He said, "wWhat if I am not better than tThe Manny sShow?"
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66 He Quit. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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66 He Quit. |
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They had a delightful talk at the dinner. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When the waiter asked them if they wanted some dessert, Kate said no. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Although Toby wanted some, Kate insisted that she would not eat dessert because she was on a diet to lose weight. Although Toby wanted some, Kate insisted that she would not eat dessert because she was on a diet When we say "on a diet" we pretty much always mean we want to lose weight, so this is grammatically correct but a native would be really unlikely to say it. |
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After they had had dinner, Toby walked Kate to her home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When Kate said goodbye, Toby didn't go. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He asked to come in for a drink. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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While they were talking and watching tv on the sofa, Kevin burst in. While "tv" is okay in really informal writing like a text message, but we usually capitalise it. |
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He held a bottle of wine, and he was obviously drunk. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Kate hadn't checked her phone so she didn't know that Kevin had quit the Manny show. Kate hadn't checked her phone so she didn't know that Kevin had quit I think this is a TV show, or something like it? We'd put the whole thing in title case if so. |
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Kevin began to doubt himself. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He said, "what if I am not better than the Manny show?" He said, " |
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