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My first diary

Hello.
I'm junior high school student in Japan.
I want to be English master because I want to watch "Pirates of carribean" without subtitle.
So, I write English text on internet.
I know it's hard way, but I will do it.
I wish i watch any movie in English.
Thanks to help

Bye

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So, I write English text on internet.


So, I write English text on the internet. So, I write English text on the internet.

Add “the” before internet.

So, I'm writeing in English text onon the internet. So, I'm writing in English on the internet.

So, I write English texts on internet. So, I write English texts on internet.

So, I will write English texts on the internet. So, I will write English texts on the internet.

Using "will" shows that this is your plan, and you will do it for a long time. Each piece of writing is a text, so making "texts" plural shows you will write many. There is only one internet.

So, I writepractice writing in English text onon the internet. So, I practice writing in English on the internet.

So, I'm writeing in English text on internet. So, I'm writing in English text on internet.

Sso, I write English text on the internet. so, I write English text on the internet.

This can be connected to the previous sentence.

So, I will write English text on internet. So, I will write English text on internet.

I know it's hard way, but I will do it.


I know it's hard way, but I will do it. I know it's hard, but I will do it.

I know it's hard way, but I will do it. I know it's hard, but I will do it.

I know it's a hard way, but I will do it. I know it's a hard way, but I will do it.

I think you mean that writing texts is a hard way to master English?

I know it's hard way, but I will do it. I know it's hard, but I will do it.

I know it's hard way, but I will'm gonna do it. I know it's hard , but I'm gonna do it.

I know it's a hard way of doing it, but I will do it. I know it's a hard way of doing it, but I will do it.

This is actually the best way of studying English.

I know it's a hard way, but I will do it. I know it's a hard way, but I will do it.

I wish i watch any movie in English.


I wish iI watch any movie in English. I wish I watch any movie in English.

Capitalize I

I wish ito watch any movie in English. I wish to watch any movie in English.

I wish iI could watch any movie in English. I wish I could watch any movie in English.

"I" must always be capitalized.

I wish i watchant to watch any movie in English without subtitles. I want to watch and understand any movie in English. I want to watch any movie in English without subtitles. I want to watch and understand any movie in English.

A native speaker would say "want" instead of "wish." "Want" is a much more general word. "Wish" is usually used in specific expressions, like: We wish you a Merry Christmas. We wish you a Happy Birthday. Close your eyes, and make a wish. I wish I could come.

I wish iant to be able to watch any movie in English. I want to be able to watch any movie in English.

Similar format above: Use phrases "I want to [verb] + [object]" to sound more natural. Could alternately say "I want to watch any movie in English" however this sentence is less natural.

I wish iI could watch any movie in English. I wish I could watch any movie in English.

I kept it as a wish since that's how you wrote your sentence. However, a more direct option would be, "I want to watch any movie in English."

I wish iI could watch any movie in English. I wish I could watch any movie in English.

I wish iI can watch any movie in English. I wish I can watch any movie in English.

I wish iI could watch any movie in English. I wish I could watch any movie in English.

Thanks to help


Thanks to you for your help. Thank you for your help.

This is the standard polite phrase in English.

Thanks tofor helping Thanks for helping

Thanks tofor your help Thanks for your help

Thanks tofor the/your help Thanks for the/your help

We thank someone one for something.

Thanks tofor the help. Thanks for the help.

'Thanks for' is another standard framing.

Thanks to help Thanks to help

Thanks for your help.

Thanks tofor the help Thanks for the help

Thanks tofor your help. Thanks for your help.

Thanks tofor helping Thanks for helping

Bye


Bye. Bye.

Bye. Bye.

My first diary


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My fFirst dDiary My First Diary

This is optional but you should always capitalize the first letter of every word except for prepositions. But if you’re writing a research paper, only the first letter of the first word (and proper nouns) should be capitalized.

Hello.


I'm junior high school student in Japan.


I'm a junior high school student in Japan. I'm a junior high school student in Japan.

Usually add “a” before singular countable nouns like student.

I'm a junior high school student in Japan. I'm a junior high school student in Japan.

we use 'a/an' before objects :)

I'm a junior high school student in Japan. I'm a junior high school student in Japan.

I'm a junior high school student in Japan. I'm a junior high school student in Japan.

It needs an article.

I'm a junior high school student in Japan. I'm a junior high school student in Japan.

I'm a junior in high school studentwho lives in Japan. I'm a junior in highschool who lives in Japan.

I'm ja Junior hHigh sSchool student in Japan. I'm a Junior High School student in Japan.

I'm a junior high school student in Japan. I'm a junior high school student in Japan.

I want to be English master because I want to watch "Pirates of carribean" without subtitle.


I want to be an English master because I want to watch "Pirates of the carribean" without subtitle. I want to be an English master because I want to watch "Pirates of the carribean" without subtitle.

Correct spelling and capitalization of the movie title.

I want to be an English master because I want to watch "Pirates of the carribean" without subtitles. I want to be an English master because I want to watch "Pirates of the carribean" without subtitles.

I want to be an English master because I want to watch "Pirates of cthe Carribean" without subtitles. I want to be an English master because I want to watch "Pirates of the Carribean" without subtitles.

I want to bemaster English master because I want to watch "Pirates of carrithe Caribbean" without subtitles. I want to master English because I want to watch "Pirates of the Caribbean" without subtitles.

It is more natural to use "master" as a verb in this sentence.

I want to bemaster English master because I want to watch "Pirates of cthe Carribean" without subtitles. I want to master English because I want to watch "Pirates of the Carribean" without subtitles.

Use phrases "I want to [verb] + [object]" to sound more natural. Requires an article after "of" in the name of movie, and also subtitles needs to be pluralized.

I want to bemaster English master because I want to watch "Pirates of carrithe Caribbean" without subtitles. I want to master English because I want to watch "Pirates of the Caribbean" without subtitles.

I want to be English mastermaster english because I want to watch "Pirates of carribean" without subtitle. I want to master english because I want to watch "Pirates of carribean" without subtitle.

I want to bmaster the English masterlanguage because I want to watch "Pirates of cCarribean" without subtitle.s, I want master the English language because I want to watch "Pirates of Carribean" without subtitles,

I want to be an English master because I want to watch "Pirates of carrithe Caribbean" without subtitles. I want to be an English master because I want to watch "Pirates of the Caribbean" without subtitles.

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