Oct. 8, 2021
64 Everything is Convenient.
64 Everything is Convenient.
Hi, this is Kevin. I'm going to show you my day in the first tier city in China, called Shanghai. This is my bedroom. Out there is my balcony. Tucked away here in the corner, is bathroom and shower. If you look there, you'll see my little kitchen. The little room is only 56 square meters. I stand in the Yangpu district of Shanghai, so the housing is considerably expensive. It ranges between 4000 to 8000 yuan. It's the end of the month. so I need to pay for my light, my internet and my phone. The great thing about China is that everything is convenient. I just need to go into a single APP. Convenience store is everywhere on the street.
64 Everything iIs Convenient.
If you are using title case, "is" needs to be capitalized.
64 Everything iIs Convenient.
Hi, this is Kevin.
I'm going to show you my day in the first tier city in China, called Shanghai.
With the comma, it sounds like there is only one first tier city and that it just happens to be called Shanghai.
This is my bedroom.
Out there is my balcony.
Tucked away here in the corner, is bathroom and shower.
Alternatively, you could put a comma before AND after "in the corner."
If you look there, you'll see my little kitchen.
The little room is only 56 square meters.
I standlive in the Yangpu district of Shanghai, so the housing is considerably expensive.
"Stand" doesn't make sense here.
It ranges between 4000 to 8000 yuan.
It's the end of the month.,
Based on what follows, it looks like you intended to put a comma and not a period here.
The great thing about China is that everything is convenient.
I just need to go into a single APPapp.
No need to write "app" in all caps.
Convenience store iss are everywhere on the street.
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64 Everything is Convenient. 64 Everything If you are using title case, "is" needs to be capitalized. |
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64 Everything is Convenient. 64 Everything |
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Hi, this is Kevin. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm going to show you my day in the first tier city in China, called Shanghai. I'm going to show you my day in the first tier city in China With the comma, it sounds like there is only one first tier city and that it just happens to be called Shanghai. |
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This is my bedroom. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Out there is my balcony. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Tucked away here in the corner, is bathroom and shower. Tucked away here in the corner Alternatively, you could put a comma before AND after "in the corner." |
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If you look there, you'll see my little kitchen. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The little room is only 56 square meters. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I stand in the Yangpu district of Shanghai, so the housing is considerably expensive. I "Stand" doesn't make sense here. |
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It ranges between 4000 to 8000 yuan. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's the end of the month. It's the end of the month Based on what follows, it looks like you intended to put a comma and not a period here. |
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so I need to pay for my light, my internet and my phone. |
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The great thing about China is that everything is convenient. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I just need to go into a single APP. I just need to go into a single No need to write "app" in all caps. |
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Convenience store is everywhere on the street. Convenience store |
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