Oct. 7, 2021
63 Hard to Relate to
63 Hard to Relate to
Jesse, a Youtuber, is excited to be sharing some different contents over the next couple of weeks. When she started to do to establish a YouTube channel, she did have a wall up. She made sure that she said everything through smiles. She didn't want to pass negative emotions. However, she didn't know what the viewers think of her videos. They have some positive feelings and some negative feelings as well.
“She comes across as a positive, motivated, uplifting person. I wish my room would look like that.” one Of viewers said.
“That can be somewhat hard to relate to. People will be watching and thinking like, you know, I wish I could be that positive. But it's hard to take the suggestion when you don't see the context that she is put in.’
63 Hard to Relate to
63 Hard to Relate to
Jesse, a Youtuber, is excited to be sharing some different contents over the next couple of weeks.
"Content" is always singular.
When she started to do to establish a YouTube channel, she did have a wall up.
"She did have a wall up" is grammatical, but the meaning is not entirely clear. Do you mean that she was hiding her true feelings behind an emotional wall? If so, you should probably make that a little more explicit. Out of context, it sounds like she has a wall that she is using as her background.
She made sure that she said everything through smiles.
She didn't want to pass on negative emotions.
However, she didn't know what the viewers thinkought of her videos.
They have some positive feelings and some negative feelings as well.
“She comes across as a positive, motivated, uplifting person.
I wish my room would look like that.,” one Ofof the viewers said.
“That can be somewhat hard to relate to.
People will be watching and thinking like, you know, I wish I could be that positive.
But it's hard to take the suggestion when you don't see the context that she is put in.’
"Suggestion" doesn't sound correct here. Do you mean that it's a suggestion for Jesse? Or that it's something that people want to emulate themselves?
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63 Hard to Relate to This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Jesse, a Youtuber, is excited to be sharing some different contents over the next couple of weeks. Jesse, a Youtuber, is excited to be sharing some different content "Content" is always singular. |
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When she started to do to establish a YouTube channel, she did have a wall up. When she started to "She did have a wall up" is grammatical, but the meaning is not entirely clear. Do you mean that she was hiding her true feelings behind an emotional wall? If so, you should probably make that a little more explicit. Out of context, it sounds like she has a wall that she is using as her background. |
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She made sure that she said everything through smiles. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She didn't want to pass negative emotions. She didn't want to pass on negative emotions. |
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However, she didn't know what the viewers think of her videos. However, she didn't know what the viewers th |
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They have some positive feelings and some negative feelings as well. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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“She comes across as a positive, motivated, uplifting person. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I wish my room would look like that.” one Of viewers said. I wish my room would look like that |
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“That can be somewhat hard to relate to. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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People will be watching and thinking like, you know, I wish I could be that positive. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But it's hard to take the suggestion when you don't see the context that she is put in.’ But it's hard to take the suggestion when you don't see the context that she is put in.’ "Suggestion" doesn't sound correct here. Do you mean that it's a suggestion for Jesse? Or that it's something that people want to emulate themselves? |
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