My tTurn to cCorrect My Turn to Correct

My turn to cCorrect My turn to Correct

My tTurn to cProvide Corrections My Turn to Provide Corrections

Yesterday I wrote my first post on this site and I didn't expect anything. Yesterday I wrote my first post on this site and I didn't expect anything.

or you could say "I made my first post"

Yesterday, I wrote my first post on this site and I didn't expect anything. Yesterday, I wrote my first post on this site and I didn't expect anything.

Yesterday I wrote my first post on this site, and I didn't expect anything. Yesterday I wrote my first post on this site, and I didn't expect anything.

Two independent clauses should be separated by comma as well as a conjunction like "and."

Yesterday, I wrote my first post on this site and I didn't expect anything. Yesterday, I wrote my first post on this site and I didn't expect anything.

But todayHowever, when I came here andI found a few corrections, I was shocked which surprised me. However, when I came here I found a few corrections which surprised me.

It's so cool that unknown people help me. It's so cool that unknown people help me.

another way to phrase this could be "it's so cool to know that unknown people are helping/ helped me"

It's so cool that unknown people helped me., It's so cool that unknown people helped me,

It's so cool that unknown people help me. It's so cool that unknown people help me.

This sentence is correct, but it doesn't sound like something a native speaker would say. "It's so cool that people I don't even know would help me," is what I would say.

It's so cool that unknown people helped me. It's so cool that unknown people helped me.

But when I clicked ton the "Write" button, I realised that now it was my turn to correct. But when I clicked on the "Write" button, I realised that now it was my turn to correct.

Bbut when I clicked ton the "Write" button, I realised that now it was my turn to do corrections. but when I clicked on the "Write" button, I realised that now was my turn to do corrections.

But when I clicked ton the "Write" button, I realiszed that now it was my turn to correct now. But when I clicked on the "Write" button, I realized that it was my turn to correct now.

I had to read your sentence several times to understand what you were saying. If you move "now" to the end of the sentence, I think it makes your realization and your intention to correct clearer.

But when I clicked to the "Write" button, I realised that now it was my turn to correct. But when I clicked to the "Write" button, I realised that now it was my turn to correct.

No correction, but something to note. British spelling is "realized", but you will see Americans write it as "realized".

And it's fair. And it's fair.

And it's fair. And it's fair.

Again, this is correct, but I think a native speaker would be more likely to say, "And that's fair."

If you want to get something from the community, you have to give something too. If you want to get something from the community, you have to give something too.