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My morning routine
I start the day with my daughter and her own morning routine, which includes changing her diaper and her clothes. Once she is ready, we go to the living room and I put her down and she starts to play independently. During that, I make myself a protein shake and prepare my table for studying one of my target languages. Once my daughter gets tired and yawns, we go outside for a long walk to maintain my daily movement and improve our mood. After we return home, my husband is usually awake and he stays with her. We discuss our plans for the day and decide what we are going to do. Most of the time, I stay at home or we visit friends with little children at the same age as my daughter. In the evening, we have dinner together and between 8 and 9 pm my daughter goes to bed. Once she fell asleep, I take a shower and go to bed as well around 10 pm.
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My Morning Routine
I start the day with my daughter and her own morning routine, which includes changing her diaper and her clothes.
Once she is ready, we go to the living room and I put her down and she starts to play independently.
During thatMeanwhile, I make myself a protein shake and prepare my table for studying one of my target languages.
Meanwhile, I make myself a protein shake and prepare my table for studying one of my target languages.
"During that" isn't wrong, but "meanwhile" sounds more natural.
Another way to phrase it would be, "While she's doing that . . ."
Once my daughter gets tired and yawns, we go outside for a long walk to maintain my daily movement and improve our mood.
After we return home, my husband is usually awake and he stays with her.
We discuss our plans for the day and decide what we are going to do.
Most of the time, I stay at home or we visit friends with little children at the same age as my daughter.
In the evening, we have dinner together and between 8 and 9 pm my daughter goes to bed.
Once she fealls asleep, I take a shower and go to bed as wellt around 10 pm.
Once she falls asleep, I take a shower and go to bed at around 10 pm.
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This was a good explanation of your routine, and it gave me the sense that it's very peaceful. Nice work!
My mMorning rRoutine
My Morning Routine
I start the day with my daughter and her own morning routine, which includes changing her diaper and her clothes.
Once she is ready, we go to the living room and I put her down and she starts to play independently.
During thatMeanwhile, I make myself a protein shake and prepare my table for studying one of my target languages.
Meanwhile, I make myself a protein shake and prepare my table for studying one of my target languages.
Once my daughter gets tired and yawns, we go outside for a long walk to maintain my daily movement and improve our mood.
After we return home, my husband is usually awake and he stays with her.
We discuss our plans for the day and decide what we are going to do.
Most of the timeGenerally, I stay at home or we visit friends with littlesmall children atround the same age as my daughter.
Generally, I stay at home or we visit friends with small children around the same age as my daughter.
In the evening, we have dinner together and between 8 and 9 pm my daughter goes to bed.
Once she fealls asleep, I take a shower and go to bed as well around 10 pm.
Once she falls asleep, I take a shower and go to bed as well around 10 pm.
Feedback
Very good indeed! It was interesting, too, to read about your daily routine. Your love for your daughter shines through.
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Small note: p.m. and a.m. should strictly speaking be written with dots as just stated, but in informal writing many people don't observe this.
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Once she is ready, we go to the living room and I put her down and she starts to play independently. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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During that, I make myself a protein shake and prepare my table for studying one of my target languages.
"During that" isn't wrong, but "meanwhile" sounds more natural. Another way to phrase it would be, "While she's doing that . . ." |
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Once my daughter gets tired and yawns, we go outside for a long walk to maintain my daily movement and improve our mood. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Most of the time, I stay at home or we visit friends with little children at the same age as my daughter.
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