April 28, 2020
Bad habit
My mother loves to go shopping. Since she buys and buys without any prospects, she make the house fulled with odds and ends. What is worse is that she is always buying cheap things. My father complains, “Don’t be penny-wise and pound-foolish.”, but she turns a deaf ear to him and say “Maybe, you’re the one I get as those things.”
母の趣味は買い物である。先の見通しもなくどんどん買うものだからすぐに家が無駄なもので一杯になってしまう。なお悪いのは安物ばかり買いこむことで、父などは安物界の銭失いだと悪口を言う。母の方はすました顔で、あなたもそうして手に入れた一つかもしれませんよ、とうそぶいている。
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Since she buys and buys without any prospects, she makethinking, she fills up the house fulled with odds and ends.
Since she buys and buys without thinking, she fills up the house with odds and ends.
What i's worse is that she i's always buying cheap things.
What's worse is that she's always buying cheap things.
If you use contractions, it sounds more natural. What is -> What's
My father complainsed, “Don’t be penny-wise and pound-foolish.”, but she turnsed a deaf ear to him and sayid “Maybe, you’rI made the one I get as those thingsmistake with you.”
My father complained, “Don’t be penny-wise and pound-foolish.”, but she turned a deaf ear to him and said “Maybe, I made the mistake with you.”
The verbs should be in past tense since it's a one time action in the past. (It's not a habit.)
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This is a fun story and I really enjoyed it.
April 29, 2020
thank you!
Since she buys and buys without any prospectsthinking/premeditation, she makefills the house fulledup with odds and ends.
Since she buys and buys without any thinking/premeditation, she fills the house up with odds and ends.
What is worse is that she is always buying cheap things.
My father complains, “Don’t be penny-wise and pound-foolish.”, b But she turns a deaf ear to him and says, “Mmaybe, you’re the reasone I get as those things.”
My father complains, “Don’t be penny-wise and pound-foolish.” But she turns a deaf ear to him and says, “maybe you’re the reason I get those things.”
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私もその悪い癖は時々ある（笑）。
でも口座の残り金額を観たら、しばらく買い物しないようになります。
BA bad habit
A bad habit
My mother loves to go shopping.
Since she buys and buys without any prospectsagenda, she makefills the house fulled with odds and ends.
Since she buys and buys without any agenda, she fills the house with odds and ends.
agenda is a plan
What i's worse is that she i's always buying cheap things.
What's worse is that she's always buying cheap things.
My father complains, “Don’t be penny-wise and pound-foolish.”, but she turns a deaf ear to him and says “Maybe, you’re the reasone I get as those things.”
My father complains, “Don’t be penny-wise and pound-foolish.”, but she turns a deaf ear to him and says “Maybe, you’re the reason I get those things.”
Not sure what you're trying to say in the last sentence but if she is blaming the father then he is the reason why
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Since she buys and buys without any prospects, she make the house crowded with full of odds and ends. |
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What is worse is that she is always buying cheap things.
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My father complains, “Don’t be penny-wise and pound-foolish.”, but she turns a deaf ear to him and say “Maybe, you’re the one I get as those things.”
My father complains, “Don’t be penny-wise and pound-foolish.”, but she turns a deaf ear to him and says “Maybe, you’re the reason Not sure what you're trying to say in the last sentence but if she is blaming the father then he is the reason why
My father complains, “Don’t be penny-wise and pound-foolish.”
My father complain The verbs should be in past tense since it's a one time action in the past. (It's not a habit.) |
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Since she buys and buys without any prospects, she make the house fulled with odds and ends.
Since she buys and buys without any agenda is a plan
Since she buys and buys without any
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