June 13, 2025
The first time that i came to the school i felt nervous because i dont knew nobody, so i sit in front a girl to talk with her but it doesnt it. I dont Know how to make new friends. I want to be more sociable but i am shy. I hope to meet people nice.
I am student of medicina, its a difficult career but the same time its satisfactory, i want to be a surgery, while enjoy me reading books of suspense.
La primera vez que vine a la escuela me sentí nerviosa porque no conocía a nadie, así que me senté enfrente de una chica para hablarle pero no funcionó. No sé como hacer nuevos amigos. Quisiera ser más sociable pero soy tímida. Espero conocer gente agradable.
Soy estudiante de medicina, es una carrera difícil pero al mismo tiempo satisfactoria, quiero ser una cirujana, mientras me divierto leyendo libros de suspenso.
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The first time that I came to the school I felt nervous because I don't know anybody, so I sat in front a girl to talk with her but she doesn't talk back.
I dont Know how to make new friends.
I want to be more sociable but i am shy.
I hope to meet nice people nice.
I hope to meet nice people.
I am student ofy medicina, ite. It's a difficult career but the same time itsit is also satisfactory, i. I want to be a surgery, whileon. I enjoy me reading books of suspensesuspenseful books.
I study medicine. It's a difficult career but it is also satisfactory. I want to be a surgeon. I enjoy reading suspenseful books.
The first time that i came to theI went to school iI felt nervous because iI donidn't kneow noanybody, so iI siat in front of a girl to talk with her but it doewasn't itgood.
The first time that I went to school I felt nervous because I didn't know anybody, so I sat in front of a girl to talk with her but it wasn't good.
I want to be more sociable but iI am shy.
I want to be more sociable but I am shy.
I hope to meet nice people nice.
I hope to meet nice people.
I am student of medicina,e, and it's a difficult career but at the same time it's satisfactory, i. I want to be a surgery, whileon. I also enjoy me reading books of suspensesuspenseful books.
I am student of medicine, and it's a difficult career but at the same time it's satisfactory. I want to be a surgeon. I also enjoy reading suspenseful books.
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Great job!!
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The first time that I came to school, I felt nervous because I didn't know anybody, so I sat in front of a girl to talk with her but that didn't happen.
I = always capitalized
"I don't" is present tense. Since you are recounting a story (already happened), "I didn't" is the proper tense.
"It doesn't it" does not mean anything. I edited here if you mean that you and the girl did not end up talking.
I don't Kknow how to make new friends.
I don't know how to make new friends.
I want to be more sociable but iI am shy.
I want to be more sociable but I am shy.
I hope to meet nice people nice.
I hope to meet nice people.
Adjectives (nice) almost always go before nouns.
I am student of medicinae, it's a difficult career but at the same time it's satisfactory, iying. I want to be a surgery, whileon, and enjoy me reading books of suspensethriller novels.
I am student of medicine, it's a difficult career but at the same time it's satisfying. I want to be a surgeon, and enjoy reading thriller novels.
Surgery is the act, surgeons are the doctors who perform it.
It's = contraction of it is. Its = possessive of it (for example: a tree and its leaves)
The last phrase sounds as if you want to read DURING performing surgery. If that isn't what you meant, I gave an alternative here. :)
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Good job. Best of luck with your education!
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The first time that i came to the school i felt nervous because i dont knew nobody, so i sit in front a girl to talk with her but it doesnt it.
The first time that I = always capitalized "I don't" is present tense. Since you are recounting a story (already happened), "I didn't" is the proper tense. "It doesn't it" does not mean anything. I edited here if you mean that you and the girl did not end up talking.
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I want to be more sociable but i am shy.
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I hope to meet people nice.
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I am student of medicina, its a difficult career but the same time its satisfactory, i want to be a surgery, while enjoy me reading books of suspense.
I am student of medicin Surgery is the act, surgeons are the doctors who perform it. It's = contraction of it is. Its = possessive of it (for example: a tree and its leaves) The last phrase sounds as if you want to read DURING performing surgery. If that isn't what you meant, I gave an alternative here. :)
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