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June 21, 2021

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6月21日话题:你喜欢怎么样庆祝你的生日?

“不过普通的一天“

我个人不太在乎过自己的生日,何况在那一天会感觉有一点尴尬。假如主动去办自己的生日活动,会觉得有一点。。。怎么样描述呢?就觉得太过分,因为我不喜欢成为注意的焦点。

这几年,我每年的生活都不太一样,所以在生日的时候我也会有不同的人在我身边,而且会在不同的环境生活。我认为最好不要有太多期望。

在生日那一天,我只希望能有一种随意而简单的快乐。如果没有人陪着我,我就会自己去做一些使我高兴的特殊活动,比如吃一些独特的美食,在家看一部没看过的电影。我最会自娱自乐!如果有亲密的人在身旁,能做一些好玩的事或者一起享受一顿饭已经很完美了!不要礼物,不太喜欢蛋糕,也不要人们围绕着我。开心地在一起就够了!


How do you like to celebrate your birthday? // "Just another day"

I don't care too about my birthday, and I feel a little awkward when it comes around. If I were to organize some birthday event for myself, I'd feel a little... how to describe it? It just feels uncomfortable and excessive, because I don't like being the focus of attention.

These years, my life is different every year, so on my birthday, I'll have different people around me, and be living in different settings. I think it's better not to have too many expectations.

On my birthday, I only hope to have a simple and casual sort of happiness. If I'm by myself, I'll enjoy some special activities that make me happy, such as eating some unique food or watching a movie I haven't seen at home. I'm good at enjoying my own company! If I'm around people I'm close to, doing something fun or enjoying a meal together would be perfect! I don't need gifts, don't like cake too much, and I don't like people focusing on me. It's enough to be happy together!

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6月21日话题:你喜欢怎么样庆祝你的生日?

“不过普通的一天“

我个人不太在乎过自己的生日,何况在那一天会感觉有一点尴尬。

假如主动去办自己的生日活动,会觉得有一点。。。怎么样描述呢?

就觉得太过分,因为我不喜欢成为注意的焦点。

这几年,我每年的生活都不太一样,所以在生日的时候我也会有不同的人在我身边,而且会在不同的环境生活。

我认为最好不要有太多期望。

在生日那一天,我只希望能有一种随意而简单的快乐。

如果没有人陪着我,我就会自己去做一些使我高兴的特殊活动,比如吃一些独特的美食,在家看一部没看过的电影。

我最会自娱自乐!

如果有亲密的人在身旁,能做一些好玩的事或者一起享受一顿饭已经很完美了!

不要礼物,不太喜欢蛋糕,也不要人们围绕着我。

开心地在一起就够了!

Feedback

中文很好。有些句子是可以调整的,但我的原则是只要没有基本错误就不要动它,否则会让作者很迷惑。提高是一个不断积累的过程,这需要作者自己慢慢完成。

6月21日话题:你喜欢怎么样庆祝你的生日?


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“不过普通的一天“


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我个人不太在乎过自己的生日,何况在那一天会感觉有一点尴尬。


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假如主动去办自己的生日活动,会觉得有一点。。。怎么样描述呢?


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就觉得太过分,因为我不喜欢成为注意的焦点。


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这几年,我每年的生活都不太一样,所以在生日的时候我也会有不同的人在我身边,而且会在不同的环境生活。


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我认为最好不要有太多期望。


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在生日那一天,我只希望能有一种随意而简单的快乐。


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如果没有人陪着我,我就会自己去做一些使我高兴的特殊活动,比如吃一些独特的美食,在家看一部没看过的电影。


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我最会自娱自乐!


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如果有亲密的人在身旁,能做一些好玩的事或者一起享受一顿饭已经很完美了!


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不要礼物,不太喜欢蛋糕,也不要人们围绕着我。


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开心地在一起就够了!


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