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My biggest regret!

It will be probably when I was 7, and I was playing on my ps2, with a new friend I made.
He was 15 and we was playing wwe game and i was wining he said he was gonna show me
a new technique so i handed him my controller and he made my player approach his then he used his ultimate move making lose i started crying to mom this kid was living with us because his mom abandoned him when he was a child and he living with his dad and his dad brought him to us while he go to works and he could work on for my auntie convenient store anyway when mom heard i was crying she started freaking out i didn't thought she was gonna get like that
and he was very apologetic and he was just pulling prank on him but she didn't listen and kicked him out at midnight That night i felt very guilty because i knew i overreacted and i was thinking i will apologies to him in the morning when he comes back but he never did that was 14 years ago
last week i heard that he died in yemen in he sleep he left he is dad to go look for his mom leaving younger brother alone and all this from 15 just started flooding back i wished i could've
meet once more time so i can say i was sorry for acting childish

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lLast week iI heard that he died in yYemen in heis sleep h. He left he is dad to go look for his mom, leaving his younger brother alone and all this from 15 years ago just started flooding back i. I wished i I could've

My biggest regret!


It will be probably when I was 7, and I was playing on my ps2, with a new friend I made.


It will beas probably when I was 7, and I was playing on my ps2, with a new friend I had made. It was probably when I was 7, and I was playing on my ps2 with a new friend I had made.

it sounds better to just say "with a new friend" "a new friend I made" doesn't add any additional meaning

He was 15 and we was playing wwe game and i was wining he said he was gonna show me


He was 15 and we wasere playing wwe game and iI was winning h. He said he was gonna show me... He was 15 and we were playing wwe game and I was winning. He said he was gonna show me...

a new technique so i handed him my controller and he made my player approach his then he used his ultimate move making lose i started crying to mom this kid was living with us because his mom abandoned him when he was a child and he living with his dad and his dad brought him to us while he go to works and he could work on for my auntie convenient store anyway when mom heard i was crying she started freaking out i didn't thought she was gonna get like that


a new technique so i handed him my controller and he made my player approach his, then he used his ultimate move making me lose i. I started crying to mom t. This kid was living with us because his mom abandoned him when he was a child and he was living with his dad and h. His dad brought him to us while he goes to works and so that he could work on forat my auntie's convenient store a. Anyway when mom heard iI was crying she started freaking out iI didn't thoughtink she was gonna get like that a new technique so i handed him my controller and he made my player approach his, then he used his ultimate move making me lose. I started crying to mom. This kid was living with us because his mom abandoned him when he was a child and he was living with his dad. His dad brought him to us while he goes to work so that he could work at my auntie's convenient store. Anyway when mom heard I was crying she started freaking out I didn't think she was gonna get like that

I'm not sure if I caught exactly what you were trying to say here

and he was very apologetic and he was just pulling prank on him but she didn't listen and kicked him out at midnight That night i felt very guilty because i knew i overreacted and i was thinking i will apologies to him in the morning when he comes back but he never did that was 14 years ago


and hHe was very apologetic and he was just pulling a prank on himme, but she didn't listen and kicked him out at midnight. That night iI felt very guilty because iI knew iI overreacted and iI was thinking iI will apologizes to him in the morning when he comes back, but he never did t. That was 14 years ago. He was very apologetic and he was just pulling a prank on me, but she didn't listen and kicked him out at midnight. That night I felt very guilty because I knew I overreacted and I was thinking I will apologize to him in the morning when he comes back, but he never did. That was 14 years ago.

last week i heard that he died in yemen in he sleep he left he is dad to go look for his mom leaving younger brother alone and all this from 15 just started flooding back i wished i could've


lLast week iI heard that he died in yYemen in heis sleep h. He left he is dad to go look for his mom, leaving his younger brother alone and all this from 15 years ago just started flooding back i. I wished i I could've Last week I heard that he died in Yemen in his sleep. He left his dad to go look for his mom, leaving his younger brother alone and all this from 15 years ago just started flooding back. I wish I could've

meet once more time so i can say i was sorry for acting childish


meet him once more time so iI can say i wasI"m sorry for acting childish met him one more time so I can say I"m sorry for acting childish

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