March 1, 2021
McJob
One twitter user posted "We can withstand low-wage work. However, there is nothing worse than the jobs which won't offer any opportunities to acquire new skills. Employees working at routine tasks would be engaged in the same tasks over the next ten years. This is a serious problem for their life plan. Someday they would be forced to quit the jobs if they settled down the easy jobs. It seems that these repetitive jobs are called "McJob" in America. Certainly, ten-years career of McDonald's part-time job won't make you competent worker."
Nowadays many people are engaged in McJob against their will. I'm one of them even though I got a master degree in medical engineering. Japan's large companies pay little attention to students' personality or career. The companies are likely to standardize new employees to get used to routine works. I'm really worried about my career. I don't want to settle down the easy job.
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McJob
One twitter user posted "We can withstand low-wage work.
However, there is nothing worse than the jobs which won't offer any opportunities to acquire new skills.
Employees working at routine tasks would be engaged in the same tasks over the next ten years.
This is a serious problem for their life plan.
Someday they would be forced to quit their jobs if they settled down theo an easy jobs.
Someday they would be forced to quit their job if they settled down to an easy job.
this scans better in english in singular
It seems that these repetitive jobs are called "McJob" in America.
Certainly, ten-years career of McDonald's part-time job won't make you competent worker."
Nowadays many people are engaged in McJobs against their will. Nowadays many people are engaged in McJobs against their will.
I'm one of them even though I got a master degree in medical engineering.
Japan's large companies pay little attention to students' personality or career.
The companies are likely to standardize new employees toso that they get used to routine works.
The companies are likely to standardize new employees so that they get used to routine work.
I don't want to settle down theo an easy job.
I don't want to settle down to an easy job.
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This is a Good piece of writing - well done - with this level of english i think you will go far with your career. Unfortunately i cannot speak Japanese - so learning a language the way you have is already a big accomplishment
March 2, 2021
I'm glad to read your warm comment. I'd like to get better at English skills for the sake of career change.
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I don't want to settle down the easy job.
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I'm really worried about my career. |
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One twitter user posted "We can withstand low-wage work. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, there is nothing worse than the jobs which won't offer any opportunities to acquire new skills. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Employees working at routine tasks would be engaged in the same tasks over the next ten years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This is a serious problem for their life plan. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Someday they would be forced to quit the jobs if they settled down the easy jobs.
Someday they would be forced to quit their job this scans better in english in singular |
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It seems that these repetitive jobs are called "McJob" in America. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Certainly, ten-years career of McDonald's part-time job won't make you competent worker." This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Nowadays many people are engaged in McJob against their will. Nowadays many people are engaged in McJobs against their will. Nowadays many people are engaged in McJobs against their will. |
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I'm one of them even though I got a master degree in medical engineering. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Japan's large companies pay little attention to students' personality or career. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The companies are likely to standardize new employees to get used to routine works.
The companies are likely to standardize new employees |
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