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Flowers Blooming in My Little Gardern Recently
Some new flowers are blooming in my small garden. You can see the pictures here: https://www.youtube.com/post/UgkxEiRuPWchONmk0lZqHBjiVbYbbFdEOFxu
The one in the first picture is a new type that has never bloomed before. It's an anemone.
I really enjoy watching them and hope you like them too.
Flowers Blooming in My Little Gardern Recently
Some new flowers are blooming in my small garden.
You can see (the) pictures here: https://www.youtube.com/post/UgkxEiRuPWchONmk0lZqHBjiVbYbbFdEOFxu
It would be more natural without “the” since this is the first time you’ve mentioned these pictures in this post.
The one in the first picture is a new type that has never bloomed before.—an anemone.
You could combine this sentence with the next.
It's an anemone.
I really enjoy watching them (grow) and hope you like them too.
“Watching” seems OK to me if it’s short for “watching them grow” or some other action.
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Beautiful!
Flowers Blooming in My Little Gardern Recently
Some new flowers are blooming in my small garden.
You can see the pictures here: https://www.youtube.com/post/UgkxEiRuPWchONmk0lZqHBjiVbYbbFdEOFxu
The one in the first picture is a new type that has never bloomed before.
It's an anemone.
I really enjoy watchviewing them and hope you like them too.
I really enjoy gazing upon them and hope you like them too.
Feedback
Super good job
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I really enjoy watching them and hope you like them too. I really enjoy I really enjoy gazing upon them and hope you like them too. I really enjoy watching them (grow) and hope you like them too. “Watching” seems OK to me if it’s short for “watching them grow” or some other action. |
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