July 27, 2025
Day 22: The Beepocalypse
Everything beeps. The fridge will hurt if you leave it open for 5 seconds. The microwave oven screams loudly if your meal is ready. The washing machine directs an opera when it finishes the laundry. Does this sounds familiar to you?
Today my dishwasher freaked me out when it beeped to say it was finished, but didn't stop for almost 10 minutes. I had to disconnect it to reset it's freaking computer. Yeah, it has one. So what? It's 2025. Even a coffee machine has an internal computer. That's not the problem. I mean, yes, that's a problem, but that's not the point now. The problem is that why everything is beeping?
If a machine just wrote on a display that it was finished, that would be more than enough. Maybe the engineers think we are all blind. But at least they would have created machines that could talk. Oh, wait... They did. Maybe I should buy a few old machine that don't beep for everything.
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I think this would sound a little better as Beep-pocalypse as it sounds like it's about bees currently :) But this is subjective.
Does this sounds familiar to you?
Does this sound familiar to you?
I had to disconnect it to reset it's freaking computer.
I had to disconnect it to reset its freaking computer.
"it's" - it is
"its" - possessive it
Lots of native speakers get this wrong too, since normally the possessive s takes an apostrophe, but its is a special case.
The problem is that "why is everything is beeping?"
The problem is "why is everything beeping?"
But at least they wcould have created machines that could talk.
But at least they could have created machines that could talk.
Maybe I should buy a few old machines that don't beep for everything. Maybe I should buy a few old machines that don't beep for everything.
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Pretty good!
My dryer is quite a bad offender. It beeps when the wash is done, but it won't let you take the laundry out until the inside temperature cools down. So it insists you do something but prevents you doing it.
July 28, 2025
Thank you!
Same here. It's a shame. :D
Day 22: The Beepocalypse Day 22: The Beepocalypse
Cute title, I love it!
The fridge willseems hurt if you leave it open for 5 seconds.
The fridge seems hurt if you leave it open for 5 seconds.
The microwave oven screams loudly if your meal is ready. The microwave oven screams loudly if your meal is ready.
*I would replace this with "when", but "if" sounds okay too!
Does this sounds familiar to you?
Does this sound familiar to you?
conjugation :)
Today my dishwasher freaked me out when it beeped to say it was finished, but didn't stop for almost 10 minutes. Today my dishwasher freaked me out when it beeped to say it was finished, but didn't stop for almost 10 minutes.
I had to disconnect it to reset it's freaking computer.
I had to disconnect it to reset its freaking computer.
For writing, "freaking" sounds a little too informal unless it's from the voice of a character. Just my opinion though.
The problem is that why: Why is everything is beeping?
The problem is: Why is everything beeping?
Maybe I should just buy a few old machines that don't beep for everything. Maybe I should just buy a few old machines that don't beep for everything.
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This is so funny I love it!! Great command of the language, just a few little tweaks. But otherwise this is great!
July 28, 2025
Thank you. :)
Day 22: The Beepocalypse
Everything beeps.
The fridge will hurt if you leave it open for 5 seconds.
The microwave oven screams loudly if your meal is ready.
The washing machine directs an opera when it finishes the laundry.
Does this sounds familiar to you?
Today my dishwasher freaked me out when it beeped to say it was finished, but didn't stop for almost 10 minutes.
Today my dishwasher freaked me out when it beeped to say it was finished but didn't stop for almost 10 minutes.
or "...finished, but it didn't stop..."
typically, dependent clauses do not need to be introduced after a comma
I had to disconnect it to reset it's freaking computer.
I had to disconnect it to reset its freaking computer.
its computer: the computer that it has
it's computer: it is computer
Yeah, it has one.
So what?
It's 2025.
Even a coffee machine has an internal computer.
That's not the problem. That's not the problem.
you could also consider
Even a coffee machine has an internal computer, but that's not the problem.
I mean, yes, that's a problem, but that's not the point now.
The problem is that why is everything is beeping?
The problem is that why is everything beeping?
in questions, the order sometimes reverses
some grammatically correct structures:
1. Everything is green.
2. Why is everything green?
3. Do you know why everything is green?
If a machine just wrotesaid on a display that it was finished, that would be more than enough.
If a machine just said on a display that it was finished, that would be more than enough.
it is uncommon to say that appliances "write"
Maybe the engineers think we are all blind.
But at least they would have created machines that could talk.
Oh, wait...
They did. They did.
more natural-looking: Oh wait...they did.
Maybe I should buy a few old machines that don't beep for everything. Maybe I should buy a few old machines that don't beep for everything.
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I found your writing perfectly understandable, nice. Also, thank you for pointing out how everything beeps, I will probably be noticing that a lot more now, haha.
July 28, 2025
Thank you, and also you're welcome. :D
Day 22: The Beepocalypse
Everything beeps.
The fridge will hurtpunish you if you leave it open for 5 seconds.
The fridge will punish you if you leave it open for 5 seconds.
Or maybe "hurt your ears"
The microwave oven screams loudly ifwhen your meal is ready.
The microwave oven screams loudly when your meal is ready.
The washing machine directperforms an opera when it finishes the laundry.
The washing machine performs an opera when it finishes the laundry.
Does this sounds familiar to you?
Today, my dishwasher freaked me out when it beeped to say it was finished, butand didn't stop for almost 10 minutes.
Today, my dishwasher freaked me out when it beeped to say it was finished, and didn't stop for almost 10 minutes.
I had to disconnect it to reset it's freaking computer.
I had to disconnect it to reset its freaking computer.
"It's" is always a conjunction for "it is".
The possessive version is always "its". Many native speakers get this wrong.
Yeah, it has one.
So what?
It's 2025.
Even a coffee machine has an internal computer.
That's not the problem.
I mean, yes, that's a problem, but that's not the point now.
The problem is that, why everything is beeping?
The problem is, why everything is beeping?
If a machine just wrote on a display that it was finished, that would be more than enough.
Maybe the engineers think we are all blind.
But at least they wshould have created machines that could talk.
But at least they should have created machines that could talk.
Oh, wait...
They did.
Maybe I should buy a few old machines that don't beep for everything. Maybe I should buy a few old machines that don't beep for everything.
July 28, 2025
Thank you. :)
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I had to disconnect it to reset it's freaking computer.
I had to disconnect it to reset it "It's" is always a conjunction for "it is". The possessive version is always "its". Many native speakers get this wrong.
I had to disconnect it to reset it its computer: the computer that it has it's computer: it is computer
I had to disconnect it to reset it For writing, "freaking" sounds a little too informal unless it's from the voice of a character. Just my opinion though.
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