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nao081122

June 2, 2025

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My a day

I came back at home after school.

I take a bath

It is very relax.

I played game after dinner.

This is my good a day.


私は学校の後、家に帰ります。

私はお風呂に入ります。

それはすごくリラックスできる。

夜ご飯の後、私はゲームをします。

これが私の良い一日です。

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nao081122

June 2, 2025

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My a day


My a day My day

My a day My day

My a day My day

I came back at home after school.


I came back at home after school. I came home after school.

I came back at home after school. I came back home after school.

I came back at home after school. I came back home after school.

I came back at home after school. I came home after school.

We say "came home" rather than "came back at home." The preposition "at" is incorrect in this context. "Come home" is the natural phrase.

I take a bath It is very relax.


I takeook a bath . It iwas very relaxing. I took a bath. It was very relaxing.

I takeook a bath . It iwas very relaxing. I took a bath. It was very relaxing.

Your first sentence is in past tense, like you are writing about what already happened. So you should write about this like it already happened too.

I takeook a bath . It iwas very relaxing. I took a bath. It was very relaxing.

I takeook a bath . It iwas very relaxing. I took a bath. It was very relaxing.

Since this happened in the past, we use the past tense "took" instead of the present tense "take." "Relax" is a verb, but here we need an adjective to describe the bath. So, "relaxing" is the correct form. We also use "was" to match past tense.

I played game after dinner.


I played games after dinner. I played games after dinner.

I played a game after dinner. I played a game after dinner.

I played a game after dinner. I played a game after dinner.

I played a game after dinner. I played a game after dinner.

"Game" is a countable noun, so we need an article: "a game."

This is my good a day.


This is myIt was a good a day for me. It was a good day for me.

This iwas my good a day. This was my good day.

This is mywas a good a day. This was a good day.

This is myIt was a good a day. It was a good day.

"This is my good a day" is incorrect in both word order and article use. The correct sentence is "It was a good day" to describe a finished day.

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