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So i can't understand people who can touch another person if there are not their friend or family. Yes I dont like when no friend or people from my family touch me without ask. However when I tell them dont touch me please they are thinking I'm scaring there. But no, for me it's just my comfortable zone where only person who can trust me and i too. Some peoples think if person don't like tactile this person is weak and they can bulling him but no. I think person who cant respect mean another person is really weak. Today my classmate punched me no hard like friend. I said him that please don't touch me I dont like this move. He said "Oh you weak, you scared punch me for answer". So in result I punched him. Are you tactile person? Say I'm right or I made mistake?

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tTactile pPerson Tactile Person

Just capitalizing the first letter of each word since it's a title :D

So i can't understand people who can touch another person if there are not their friend or family.


So iI can't understand people who can touch another person if there are not their friends or family. So I can't understand people who touch another person if there are not their friends or family.

So i, I can't understand people who can touch another person ifople when therey are not their friends or family. So, I can't understand people who touch other people when they are not friends or family.

First, "I" always has to be capitalized :) When you wrote "there are" I think that you meant "they are" You can also try this version for better clarity and flow "So, I can't understand people who touch others if they are not friends or family."

So iI can't understand people who can touch another person if there ay're not their friend or family. So I can't understand people who can touch another person if they're not their friend or family.

"there" refers to a location "they're" is an abbreviation of "they are" Native speakers sometimes make this mistake too.

Yes I dont like when no friend or people from my family touch me without ask.


Yes, I don't like when noa friend or peoplerson from my family touches me without asking. Yes, I don't like when a friend or person from my family touches me without asking.

Yes II also dont like it when no friend or people from my familysomeone who isn’t a friend or family member touches me without asking. I also dont like it when someone who isn’t a friend or family member touches me without asking.

“Yes” is a bit abrupt here; So, let's try “I also don’t like it when…” for better flow. “No friend or people from my family” sounds a tiny bit awkward. Instead, we could try “someone who’s not a friend or family member.” “Without ask” should be “without asking.” And I fixed a few small grammar errors with the contractions :D

Yes, I don't like when people who are not friends or people from my family touch me without asking. Yes, I don't like when people who are not friends or people from my family touch me without asking.

However when I tell them dont touch me please they are thinking I'm scaring there.


However, when I tell them, don't touch me please, they are thinking that I'm scaring therem. However, when I tell them, don't touch me please, they are thinking that I'm scaring them.

However, when I tell them d, “Dont touch me, please,” they are thinking I'm scaring thered. However, when I tell them, “Dont touch me, please,” they think Im scared.

“Dont” should be “don’t” with an apostrophe. Add commas for clarity: “However, when I tell them, ‘Don’t touch me, please,’…” “They are thinking I'm scaring there” is unclear—probably meant “they think I’m scared.” I'm not entirely sure if you meant to say that people think that you are scared when you don't want to be touched or that you are scary. Just in case, here's the second version: "However, when I tell them, “Don’t touch me, please,” they think that I'm scary.”

However when I tell them "don't touch me please" they are thinking I'm scaring thered. However when I tell them "don't touch me please" they think I'm scared.

So in result I punched him.


So in, as a result, I punched him. So, as a result, I punched him.

So, in resultthe end, I punched him. So, in the end, I punched him.

For grammatical reasons, “So in result” could instead become “So, in the end” or “So I ended up” or even "As a result, I"

So in resultturn, I punched him. So in return, I punched him.

But no, for me it's just my comfortable zone where only person who can trust me and i too.


But no, for me, it's just my comfortable zone where only personople who can trust me and iI trust them too. But no, for me, it's just my comfort zone where only people who can trust me and I trust them too.

You could also say "But no, for me, it's just my comfort zone where only a person who can trust me and I trust them too."

But no, for me it's just my comfortable zone, where only personople I trust and who can trust me and i tore allowed to do so. But noits just my comfort zone, where only people I trust and who trust me are allowed to do so.

"Comfortable zone" was very close :) but it's actually, "comfort zone." "Only person who can trust me and I too" sounds a little unclear and the phrasing is a bit awkward. I am unsure, but I think that I know what you meant :D My understanding is that you meant "only people I trust and who trust me."

But no, for me it's just my comfortable zone where only personthat's only for myself and people who canI trust me and i too. But no, for me it's just my comfortable zone that's only for myself and people who I trust

Some peoples think if person don't like tactile this person is weak and they can bulling him but no.


Some peoples think if a person doesn't like tactile then, this person is weak and they can bulling hiy them but, no. Some people think if a person doesn't like tactile then, this person is weak and they can bully them but, no.

Some peoples think if persthat if someone don'esn’t like tactile this person is weak and they can bulling him but nobeing touched, they’re weak and easy to bully, but that’s not true. Some people think that if someone doesn’t like being touched, they’re weak and easy to bully, but that’s not true.

Bulling should be "bully" and instead of tactile, it sounds a little more natural to say to "if someone doesn't like being touched" And peoples becomes people :)

Some peoples think if personsomeone else doesn't like tactileouching, then thisat person is weak and they can bulling himy them, but no. Some people think if someone else doesn't like touching, then that person is weak and they can bully them, but no.

"people" is already the plural of "person" "peoples" is a different word, with a meaning like "societies" or "cultures" "but no" is very slangy/conversational. I left it in, but it's very rare in written English.

I think person who cant respect mean another person is really weak.


I think personople who can't respect mean another person is, they are really weak. I think people who can't respect another person, they are really weak.

I think personthat people who can't respect mean another person is really weak.others are actually the weak ones. I think that people who can't respect others are actually the weak ones.

Don't forget your apostrophes when using contractions :D Cant -> Can't Dont -> Don't Shouldnt -> Shouldn't and so on :) And just made some grammar changes

I think person who cantit's the inability to respect that means another person is really weak. I think it's the inability to respect that means another person is really weak.

Today my classmate punched me no hard like friend.


Today, my classmate punched me nso hard like friend. Today, my classmate punched me so hard like friend.

Today, my classmate punched me no hard like friend. It wasn’t hard—more like something a friend might do. Today, my classmate punched me. It wasn’t hard—more like something a friend might do.

I did this just to make the sentence a little bit clearer. Instead of "no hard" it would be "not hard" or "it wasn't hard" "like friend" could also be "like a friend might"

Today my classmate punched me, not hard lik, more friend.ly-like Today my classmate punched me, not hard, more friendly-like

I said him that please don't touch me I dont like this move.


I said to him that p"Please, don't touch me, I don't like this move". I said to him that "Please, don't touch me, I don't like this".

I saitold him that p, "Please don't touch me, I don't like this move.at." I told him, "Please don't touch me, I don't like that."

Also, we need to use quotations because you are using dialogue :) “Said him” -> “told him.” “Don’t” needs an apostrophe. “This move” -> could instead be “that kind of thing” or “being touched like that.”

I said to him that p"Please don't touch me, I don't like this move". I said to him "Please don't touch me, I don't like this".

He said "Oh you weak, you scared punch me for answer".


He said "Oh you're weak, you're scared to punch me foras an answer". He said "Oh you're weak, you're scared to punch me as an answer".

He said ", “Oh, you’re weak, you. You’re scared p. Punch me for answer".back if you’re not.” He said, “Oh, you’re weak. You’re scared. Punch me back if you’re not.”

“You weak” should be “You’re weak.” “You scared” should be “You’re scared.” “Punch me for answer” needs to be a bit clearer. You could say, “Punch me back if you’re not.” or say, "hit me back if you're not." And the period (.) should stay inside the quotations. For example: She said, "I went to the store and bought some cheese." The period is inside the " " A few other small grammar changes as well :)

He said "Oh you're weak, you're scared, punch me for answerback". He said "Oh you're weak, you're scared, punch me back".

Are you tactile person?


Are you a tactile person? Are you a tactile person?

Are you a tactile person? Are you a tactile person?

Are you a tactile person? Are you a tactile person?

Say I'm right or I made mistake?


SayTell me if I'm right or I made a mistake? Tell me if I'm right or I made a mistake?

Say I'm right or I made mistake?

We need to end this using a question word (who, what, when, where, why, how do, does, etc.). So, instead of "say" which sounds a bit like a command, we could use "do" to express the same thing. "Do you think that I was right, or did I make a mistake?" or "Do you think that I made a mistake? What would you have done?" we could ask two questions so that the reader can put themselves in your shoes.

SayDo you think I'm right or I made a mistake? Do you think I'm right or I made a mistake?

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