June 23, 2021
Dinner time
I don't look up an atmospheric temperature today. But it seems to be similar to yesterday. It is nearing twilight. I am considering what I will eat as a dinner, yakitori, McDonald's, or something else. It is because McDonald's in Japan today started to re-offer the popular ever menu including Texas Burgers. The sale will, though, be for a limited time. Since the price of a Texas Burger is the same as a ''Double'' Big Mac cost at 490 yen, even if I order it, I will do as much as one burger with other choices.
Thank you also today. (I'm sorry this diary was posted later. It is already night. lol)
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I doidn't look up an atmosphericthe temperature today.
I didn't look up the temperature today.
You don't need to say atmospheric
I am cwonsidering what I willshould eat as afor dinner,: yakitori, McDonald's, or something else.
I am wondering what I should eat for dinner: yakitori, McDonald's, or something else.
It is can't make a decision because McDonald's in Japan today started to re-offer theing popular ever menuitems, including the Texas Burgers, again in Japan today.
I can't make a decision because McDonald's started offering popular items, including the Texas Burger, again in Japan today.
The sale will, though, only be for a limited time.
The sale will only be for a limited time.
Since the price of a Texas Burger is the same as a ''Double'' Big Mac cost at 490 yen, even if I order it, I will do as much as one burger with other choices.
Since the price of a Texas Burger is the same as a Double Big Mac at 490 yen, even if I order it, I will do as much as one burger with other choices.
Not really sure what "do as much" means here.
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I'd definitely pick yakitori over McDonald's!
June 23, 2021
''Cost'' here is a past participle. But can't you say it? I underscored ''double'' because this is not a normal Big Mac for letting them understood distinctive. ''Do'' means order because it looks like a repetition to avoid. The temperature has many meanings, so I wanted to add it.
I am bad at punctuation. So I got to want to practice '':.'' Thank you.
June 24, 2021
Oh, I see. You were using "cost" as a verb. I thought it was a noun. Still though, I think it would make the sentence awkward to use it that way. You could say something like: "Since the Texas Burger and Double Big Mac cost the same (490 yen)...."
For the quotation marks, I think it would be better to put it in italics (although I don't think you can do that on this website).
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It is nearing twilight. |
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But it seems to be similar to yesterday. |
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Dinner time |
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I don't look up an atmospheric temperature today.
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I am considering what I will eat as a dinner, yakitori, McDonald's, or something else.
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It is because McDonald's in Japan today started to re-offer the popular ever menu including Texas Burgers.
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The sale will, though, be for a limited time.
The sale will |
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Since the price of a Texas Burger is the same as a ''Double'' Big Mac cost at 490 yen, even if I order it, I will do as much as one burger with other choices.
Since the price of a Texas Burger is the same as a Not really sure what "do as much" means here. |
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Thank you also today. |
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(I'm sorry this diary was posted later. It is already night. lol) |
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