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I still remember in my childhood i prefer winter. Back then there were still snowing days, and i would sometimes play outside with other kids. My father is an interesting man and he always shows us, me and my little brother thick ice blocks taken from pool or river. It's now snowing for years now, and i do not like winter anymore. Instead, Autumn became the new favorite one until a heart-breaking date. Severe melancholy haunted me in the last two whole springs, so now my favorite part would be summer as at least, it's not treating me badly, isn't it?
I still remember in my childhood i prefer winterpreferring winter in my childhood.
I still remember preferring winter in my childhood.
Back then there were still snowingy days, and iI would sometimes play outside with other kids.
Back then there were still snowy days, and I would sometimes play outside with other kids.
My father is an interesting man, and he always shows us, me and my little brother, thick ice blocks taken from a pool or river. My father is an interesting man, and he always shows us, me and my little brother, thick ice blocks taken from a pool or river.
It's nowbeen snowing for years now, and iI do not like winter anymore.
It's been snowing for years now, and I do not like winter anymore.
you could also write: It's now been snowing for years. Any's fine
Instead, Autumn became themy new favorite seasone until a heart-breaking date.
Instead, Autumn became my new favorite season until a heart-breaking date.
Severe melancholy haunted me in the last two whole springs, so now my favorite part would be summer as at least, it's noseason is summer since it at least treatings me badly, isn't it?well
Severe melancholy haunted me in the last two springs, so now my favorite season is summer since it at least treats me well
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I still remember in my childhood i prefer winter.
I still remember |
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Back then there were still snowing days, and i would sometimes play outside with other kids.
Back then there were still snow |
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My father is an interesting man and he always shows us, me and my little brother thick ice blocks taken from pool or river. My father is an interesting man, and he always shows us, me and my little brother, thick ice blocks taken from a pool or river. My father is an interesting man, and he always shows us, me and my little brother, thick ice blocks taken from a pool or river. |
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It's now snowing for years now, and i do not like winter anymore.
It's you could also write: It's now been snowing for years. Any's fine |
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Instead, Autumn became the new favorite one until a heart-breaking date.
Instead, Autumn became |
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Severe melancholy haunted me in the last two whole springs, so now my favorite part would be summer as at least, it's not treating me badly, isn't it?
Severe melancholy haunted me in the last two |
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