020302-Going to Dali (1) 020302-Going to Dali (1)

020302-Go to Dali (1) 020302-Go to Dali (1)

Maybe “Trip” instead?

At the beginning of the month, I visited Dali, a tourism hit spot in the Yunnan Pprovince, of China, to go on holiday. At the beginning of the month, I visited Dali, a tourist spot in the Yunnan province of China, to go on holiday.

You can also say: "At the beginning of the month, I went on vacation to Dali, a tourist spot in Yunnan, China."

At the beginning of the month, I visited Dali, a tourism hiotspot in Yunnan Province, China, to go on holiday. At the beginning of the month, I visited Dali, a tourism hotspot in Yunnan Province, China, to go on holiday.

At the beginning of the month, I visited Dali, a tourism hitplace/spot/area in Yunnan Province, China, to go onfor a holiday. At the beginning of the month, I visited Dali, a tourism place/spot/area in Yunnan Province, China, for a holiday.

The sky iwas so sapphire blue, and differentvarious sizes of clouds float ed upon it. The sky was so sapphire blue, and various sizes of clouds floated upon it.

The sky iwas so sapphire, and differentvaryingly sizes ofd clouds floated on it. The sky was so sapphire, and varyingly sized clouds floated on it.

Cool!

The warm spring air made people languid. The warm spring air made people languid.

I usually hear "languid" in more literary/poetic writing. Other words you can use are "sluggish" or "lethargic."

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Dali has many stories, and it also has a name as ”China's hippie heartland“, cause it was wallet-friendly for those youth who grip copies of On the Road and their art dreams. Dali has many stories, and it also has a name as ”China's hippie heartland“, cause it was wallet-friendly for those youth who grip copies of On the Road and their art dreams.

Beautifully depicted! I’m honestly not sure if my suggestion is any more natural than your original text.

Dali has many stories, and it also has a named as ”China's hippie heartland“, because it was wallet-friendlyaffordable for the youth who grip On the Road and art dreams. Dali has many stories, and it also named as ”China's hippie heartland“, because it was affordable for the youth who grip On the Road and art dreams.

grip On the Road and art dreams.<-----I don't understand

But ithat's in the past. But that's in the past.

But it'all that is in the past. But all that is in the past.

But ithat's in the past. But that's in the past.

The taxi driver said the tourism was battered bytook a hit from the lockdown, and it isdid. The taxi driver said the tourism took a hit from the lockdown, and it did.

hHanging around in the grand old town, I found that many shops were closed and had "For Rent" signs. Hanging around in the grand old town, I found that many shops were closed and had "For Rent" signs.

hHanging around in the grand old town, I found many shops were closed and had "For Rent". Hanging around in the grand old town, I found many shops were closed and had "For Rent".

hHanging around in the grand old town, I found many shops were closed and had "For Rent". Hanging around in the grand old town, I found many shops were closed and had "For Rent".

Plenty of interesting young vendors also left, and cookie-cutter goods are rampant inboring, factory-made goods littered the pedestrian streets. Plenty of interesting young vendors also left, and boring, factory-made goods littered the pedestrian streets.

不太懂"cookie-cutter goods"是什么意思 ~~ edited!

However, I still haved fun there. However, I still had fun there.