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courageuse19

Oct. 8, 2022

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Challenge, Day 08

Today was eighth day of my English challenge. I woke up at five o'clock am. I reviewed some English lessons. Then, I learn how use application Canva.

In the afternoon, I read some English corrections in the site. Then, I decided to use some words in the sentence which I learn yesterday.

Here are some words: To turn on, to chat, to be positive, to hung, to quit, to googel, I feel like+ving, to come over.

I am always postive, so I will improve my English.

I am positive, so I work very hard to start my own business. My only wish is to help poor people.

I am going to come home in a five minutes.

She comes over. she lives nearby.

I can't wait to meet my friend at the aerport. I feel like hanging him for a while.

I can't wait to meet my friend at the aerport. I want to hang him for a long time.

I am chatting to a friend over Skype.

Are you quitting for real?

I am googling something for my job!


Where is the remote? I need to turn on the TV.

I want to thank the people who helped and corrected me.

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etherealite

Oct. 9, 2022

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Then, I learnt how to use application Canva.

I learn is present tense, I learnt is past tense.
How to use, like, how to write, how to sing, etc.

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etherealite

Oct. 9, 2022

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Then, I learned how to use an application called Canva.

If you want to use a comma, use it to combine this corrected sentence with the previous one.

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etherealite

Oct. 9, 2022

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Then, I decided to use some words in thea sentence, words which I had learned yesterday.

Without this correction it is hard for the reader to understand what exactly it is that you learned yesterday. The original sentence you wrote could be read to mean "I learned some words from a sentence yesterday and then I used those words".

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etherealite

Oct. 9, 2022

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etherealite

Oct. 9, 2022

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I woke up at five o'clock am.

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etherealite

Oct. 9, 2022

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Then, I learned how to use an application called Canva.

If you want to use a comma, use it to combine this corrected sentence with the previous one.

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Oct. 9, 2022

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etherealite

Oct. 9, 2022

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I am going to come home in a five minutes.

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Oct. 9, 2022

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etherealite

Oct. 9, 2022

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Then, I learned how to use an application called Canva.

If you want to use a comma, use it to combine this corrected sentence with the previous one.

I reviewed some English lessons.

In the afternoon, I read some English corrections in the site.

I am positive, so I work very hard to start my own business.

My only wish is to help poor people.

She comes over.

I am chatting to a friend over Skype.

Are you quitting for real?

I am googling something for my job!

Where is the remote?

I need to turn on the TV.

I want to thank the people who helped and corrected me.

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etherealite

Oct. 9, 2022

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etherealite

Oct. 9, 2022

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I woke up at five o'clock amAM.

Note, depending on the context, simply "o'clock", "AM", or just the number by itself will be okay.

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etherealite

Oct. 9, 2022

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Then, I learned how use an application called Canva.

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etherealite

Oct. 9, 2022

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In the afternoon, I read some English corrections in the site.

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etherealite

Oct. 9, 2022

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I am going to combe home in a five minutes.

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oenectot

Oct. 12, 2022

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You can't say or write "in a five minutes", it is never correct in any circumstance.

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etherealite

Oct. 9, 2022

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Then, I learn how usto use the application Canva.

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etherealite

Oct. 9, 2022

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Then, I decided to use some words infrom the sentence which I learn yesterday.

Use "from" here because you're taking the words that you learned a day before.

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etherealite

Oct. 9, 2022

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Challenge, Day 08


English Challenge, Day 08 English Challenge, Day 08

It's good to be specific about a challenge or contest or something like that.

Today was eighth day of my English challenge.


Today was the eighth day of my English challenge. Today was the eighth day of my English challenge.

Today was the eighth day of my English challenge. Today was the eighth day of my English challenge.

You could write here 'the eighth day' or just 'day 8'.

I woke up at five o'clock am.


I woke up at five o'clock am. I woke up at five o'clock.

Don't need "am" since the reader assumes that you're talking about am.

I woke up at five o'clock amAM. I woke up at five AM.

Note, depending on the context, simply "o'clock", "AM", or just the number by itself will be okay.

I woke up at five o'clock am. I woke up at five o'clock am.

Short sentence

I woke up at five o'clock am. I woke up at five o'clock.

Here you can either write five o'clock, or you can just put 5am.

I reviewed some English lessons.


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I reviewed some English lessons. I reviewed some English lessons.

Short sentence

Then, I learn how use application Canva.


Then, I learn how usto use the application Canva. Then, I learn how to use the application Canva.

Then, I learned how use an application called Canva. Then, I learned how use an application called Canva.

Then, I learned how to use an application called Canva. Then I learned how to use an application called Canva.

If you want to use a comma, use it to combine this corrected sentence with the previous one.

Then, I learnt how to use application Canva. Then, I learnt how to use application Canva.

I learn is present tense, I learnt is past tense. How to use, like, how to write, how to sing, etc.

In the afternoon, I read some English corrections in the site.


In the afternoon, I read some English corrections ion theis site. In the afternoon, I read some English corrections on this site.

If you're talking about LangCorrect here, then use "this site" instead of the site. It's more specific.

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In the afternoon, I read some English corrections ion the is website. In the afternoon, I read some English corrections on this website.

Using 'on' as your preposition here sounds more natural here. You should be more specific about what you mean by your expression `on the site`. As it stands right now this expression is too ambiguous to feel natural. You can use `on a website` if you desire the expression to remain ambiguous as to which website you were reading the corrections on. In the case that your intended meaning was literally this website, langcorrect.com, then `on this website` will do.

In the afternoon, I read some English corrections ion the site. In the afternoon, I read some English corrections on the site.

On the website, rather than in. It is confusing. You go ON the internet, ON the website, you talk ON the phone. :)

Then, I decided to use some words in the sentence which I learn yesterday.


Then, I decided to use some words infrom the sentence which I learn yesterday. Then, I decided to use some words from the sentence I learn yesterday.

Use "from" here because you're taking the words that you learned a day before.

Then, I decided to use some words in the sentencemake sentences with some words which I learned yesterday. Then, I decided to make sentences with some words which I learned yesterday.

Then, I decided to use some words in thea sentence, words which I had learned yesterday. Then I decided to use some words in a sentence, words which I had learned yesterday.

Without this correction it is hard for the reader to understand what exactly it is that you learned yesterday. The original sentence you wrote could be read to mean "I learned some words from a sentence yesterday and then I used those words".

Then, I decided to use some words in thea sentence which I learnt yesterday. Then, I decided to use some words in a sentence which I learnt yesterday.

In a sentence, because it is not a specific sentence. Past tense of I learn, I learnt.

Here are some words: To turn on, to chat, to be positive, to hung, to quit, to googel, I feel like+ving, to come over.


Here are some words: To turn on, to chat, to be positive, to hung, to quit, to googele, I feel like+ving, to come over. Here are some words: To turn on, to chat, to be positive, to hung, to quit, to google, I feel like+ving, to come over.

Here are some words: To turn on, to chat, to be positive, to huang, to quit, to googele, I feel like+ving, to come over. Here are some words: To turn on, to chat, to be positive, to hang, to quit, to google, I feel like+ving, to come over.

Here are some wordexpressions: To turn on, to chat, to be positive, to become hung, to quit, to googele, I feel like+ving, to come over. Here are some expressions: To turn on, to chat, to be positive, to become hung, to quit, to google, I feel like+ing, to come over.

The way you have listed them these are not really words, at least in the general sense.

Here are some wordphrases: To turn on, to chat, to be positive, to huang, to quit, to googele, I feel like+ving, to come over. Here are some phrases: To turn on, to chat, to be positive, to hang, to quit, to google, I feel like+ving, to come over.

They are words, but to be more specific, you can say phrases. To hang. I hung (a picture) is past tense. Googel -> Google 'I feel like +ving'. Do you mean - verb + ing? Having, Singing, Doing? This is correct.

I am always postive, so I will improve my English.


I am always positive, so I will improve my English. I am always positive, so I will improve my English.

I am always positive, so I will improve my English. I am always positive so I will improve my English.

My style preference is for less usage of commas but I'm sure other people's opinions may differ.

I am always postive, so I will improve my English. I am always postive, so I will improve my English.

Excellent!!

I am positive, so I work very hard to start my own business.


I am positive, so I will work very hard to start my own business. I am positive, so I will work very hard to start my own business.

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I am positive, so I will work very hard to start my own business. I am positive so I will work very hard to start my own business.

My style preference is for less usage of commas but I'm sure other people's opinions may differ.

My only wish is to help poor people.


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I am going to come home in a five minutes.


I am going to come home in a five minutes. I am going home in five minutes.

I am going to combe home in a five minutes. I am going to be home in five minutes.

I am going to come home in a five minutes. I am going to come home in five minutes.

She comes over.


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she lives nearby.


sShe lives nearby. She lives nearby.

I can't wait to meet my friend at the aerport.


I can't wait to meet my friend at the aeirport. I can't wait to meet my friend at the airport.

I can't wait to meet my friend at the aeirport. I can't wait to meet my friend at the airport.

I can't wait to meet my friend at the aeirport. I can't wait to meet my friend at the airport.

Airport. This is a word called Aerospace. It is confusing.

I feel like hanging him for a while.


I feel like hanging out with him for a while. I feel like hanging out with him for a while.

"Hang someone" means kill them with a rope.

I feel like hanging with him for a while. I feel like hanging with him for a while.

The phrase "hanging him" literally means to try and kill the person with rope, not at all what you intended I'm sure.

I feel like hanging out with him for a while. I feel like hanging out with him for a while.

Oh dear!! 'I feel like hanging him' means something very different from 'I feel like hanging out with him'! Hanging out, means to spend time with someone. Hanging him, means to kill him! Funny mistake, haha.

I can't wait to meet my friend at the aerport.


I can't wait to meet my friend at the aeirport. I can't wait to meet my friend at the airport.

I can't wait to meet my friend at the aeirport. I can't wait to meet my friend at the airport.

I can't wait to meet my friend at the aeirport. I can't wait to meet my friend at the airport.

I want to hang him for a long time.


I want to hang out with him for a long time. I want to hang out with him for a long time.

Hanging is a method of dying. "I want to hang him" sounds like you want to kill this person, which I'm sure you don't want 😅. "I want to hang OUT with him" sounds much better.

I want to hang out with him for a long time. I want to hang out with him for a long time.

Same as before

I want to hang with him for a long time. I want to hang with him for a long time.

Another usage of `hang` without a preposition, don't do this because it means you want to kill the person.

I want to hang out with him for a long time. I want to hang out with him for a long time.

I am chatting to a friend over Skype.


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I am chatting towith a friend over Skype. I am chatting with a friend over Skype.

Are you quitting for real?


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I am googling something for my job!


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Where is the remote?


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I need to turn on the TV.


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I want to thank the people who helped and corrected me.


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