My fFavorite sSeason My Favorite Season

Important words in title need a capital letter.

My fFavorite sSeason My Favorite Season

Capitalization

In my country summer is a little bit hot,. Winter is a very cold season. In my country summer is a little bit hot. Winter is a very cold season.

Joining two sentences with a comma is called a comma splice and it not good grammar. Needs to be: In my country summer is a little bit hot. Winter is a very cold season. or: In my country summer is a little bit hot; Winter is a very cold season.

In my country, summer is a little bit hot, W and winter is a very cold season. In my country, summer is a little bit hot and winter is a very cold season.

'and' is used to make it a full sentence

In my country, the summer is a little bit hot, W and the winter is a very cold season. In my country, the summer is a little bit hot and the winter is very cold.

Fixed grammar

I think it is understandablye that I like Ssummer. I think it is understandable that I like summer.

"summer" is not written with a capital letter. understandable not understandably. Need the adjective not an adverb.

I think it is understandablye that I like Ssummer. I think it is understandable that I like summer.

OR 'Understandably, I like summer'

I think it is understandablyobvious that I like Ssummer. I think it is obvious that I like summer.

Summer is not a proper noun and added a more natural word

In summer you don't have to wear a lot of clothes and go to school in Sa snow Sstorm. In summer you don't have to wear a lot of clothes and go to school in a snow storm.

"snow storm" does not start with capital letters. you could say "... clothes or go to ..."

In summer you don't have to wear a lot of clothes andor go to school in Sa snow Sstorm. In summer you don't have to wear a lot of clothes or go to school in a snow storm.

'or' is used as they are to things that don't have to happen at the same time

In summer, you don't have to wear a lot of clothes and you don't have to go to school in Ssnow Sstorms. In summer, you don't have to wear a lot of clothes and you don't have to go to school in snow storms.

Unnecessary capitalization. And grammar mistakes

But Wwinter is beautiful too. But winter is beautiful too.

"winter" does not start with a capital letter.

But Wwinter is beautiful too. But winter is beautiful too.

This is fine but its sound more natural if 'but' doesn't start a sentence. Either add it to the previous sentence or don't use 'but' --> 'Winter is beautiful too'

But WHowever, winter is beautiful too. However, winter is beautiful too.

Unnecessary capitalization, and in grammatically correct writing it is not good to start sentences with "but".

For me, summer is the time when I can develop myself because all summer we have holidays all summer. For me summer is the time when I can develop myself because we have holidays all summer.

Think "we have holidays all summer" sounds better.

For me, summer is the time when I can develop because all summer we have holidays all summer. For me, summer is the time when I can develop because we have holidays all summer.

'all summer' is additional information so it sounds more natural if it is after the main information

For me, summer is a time when I can develop because all summer we have holidays all summer long. For me, summer is a time when I can develop because we have holidays all summer long.

I am not sure what you meant by develop

You don't need to sit in school in the heat when our schools haven'tithout air conditionersing. You don't need to sit in school in the heat without air conditioning.

Have rephrased the end of the sentence.

You don't need to sit in school in the heat when our schools haven't got air conditioners. You don't need to sit in school in the heat when our schools haven't got air conditioners.

You don't needhave to sit in school in the heat when our schools haven'tthe heat at school when our schools don't have any air conditioners. You don't have to sit in the heat at school when our schools don't have any air conditioners.

More natural

Nevertheless, Ssummer has minuses for me. Nevertheless, summer has minuses for me.

"summer" not capitalised. Summer has more than one minus so use plural form "minuses".

Nevertheless, Ssummer has minusome drawbacks for me. Nevertheless, summer has some drawbacks for me.

Sounds more natural and uses 'some' as you list more that one reason - would be 'a drawback' if you list only one thing

Nevertheless, Summer has minus for mesome disadvantages. Nevertheless, Summer has some disadvantages.

Minus isn't used when talking about pros/cons or advantages/disadvantages.

It has a lot of insects and sometimes it's too hot . It has a lot of insects and sometimes it's too hot.