It wasToday, it rainyed at noon and cloudywas overcast in the afternoon. Today, it rained at noon and was overcast in the afternoon.

The sky became blue, and sun showed up from time to timeFrom time to time, the sun would appear and I could see glimpses of blue sky. From time to time, the sun would appear and I could see glimpses of blue sky.

WThe weather forecast said that it wouldn't rain againnymore, so I decided to visit Auntie De. The weather forecast said that it wouldn't rain anymore, so I decided to visit Auntie De.

It had been three weeks that I didn'since I last visited her. It had been three weeks since I last visited her.

The main road was still undergoing maintenance, so it was a bit rugged. The main road was still undergoing maintenance, so it was a bit rugged.

I think "rough" or "uneven" would be better than "rugged" here.

When I arrived, Auntie De was about to go ing to ther fields. When I arrived, Auntie De was about to go into the fields.

She advised me to stay in ther house, but I refuesed and told her that I wanted to go with her. She advised me to stay in the house, but I refused and told her that I wanted to go with her.

I wore her shoet rain boots which wasere so soft to methin that I could feel the stones through the soles. I wore her rain boots which were so thin that I could feel the stones through the soles.

But I could withstandtolerate it, because I wanted to go for a walk in the fields. But I could tolerate it, because I wanted to go for a walk in the fields.

After the raining, the air was fresh and the plants were so green, which made me very pleasanthappy. After the rain, the air was fresh and the plants were so green, which made me very happy.

When we passed someone's house, a woman asked Auntie De, "why thedoes that girl sivvisit you so frequoftent?" When we passed someone's house, a woman asked Auntie De, "why does that girl visit you so often?"

"She is just a friend.," "She is just a friend,"

Then she told the woman that who my father was because there were a lot people in this town knew my father in town. Then she told the woman who my father was because a lot people in this town knew my father.

I was a little surprised while I heard the word "friend"." I was a little surprised while I heard the word "friend."

People in town hardly use the word when they are much older thanwho are much older than you rarely use that word to describe you. People who are much older than you rarely use that word to describe you.

Because of the continuous rainingfall, all the fields were full of waterwaterlogged. Because of the continuous rainfall, all the fields were waterlogged.

She told me her fields. She told me her fields.

not sure what you're trying to say here, but this sentence is not grammatically correct

I counted that she had five piece of fields.According to my count, she had five plots of land(?) According to my count, she had five plots of land(?)

“Have you ever transplanted plants from one location to another?" “Have you ever transplanted plants from one location to another?"

I added a little bit extra context because the word "transplant" to a normal American English speaker almost always refers to an organ transplant, not moving a plant from one location to another. 你想说 “移植” 对吗？我查了我的词典，在中文里 “移植” 可以用来说秧苗和树木，但是英语里，我们只会说 transplant 器官，不会说 transplant 植物。

asked Auntie De, with surprisedly. asked Auntie De, with surprise.

I told her that I had experienced all thedid all kinds of farm work when I was a child. I told her that I did all kinds of farm work when I was a child.

Then we walked along the ridge of canal. Then we walked along the ridge of canal.

The water inside was pretty linpidclear though there was much sand under ita lot of sand at the bottom. The water inside was pretty clear though there was a lot of sand at the bottom.

I saw manylots of small fish swimming about happily. I saw lots of small fish swimming about happily.

I rode my bike while she rode her electrical vehicle scooter (?). I rode my bike while she rode her electric scooter (?).