June 13, 2022
Last Saturday we went to theater to see a play that was really good. The actors were flawless, but I don't want to talk about this play but about the sound in the plays. For a reason I don't know, alls plays have some moments that the sound is very, very, very high. Imagine than during a play the actors are talking with a normal sound, and suddenly it come a scene with a deafening sound. Besides, it can be repeated several times. For me are, these are a very unpleasing moments that does not make sense. This ussually occurs in the most of the theater plays in Barcelona, but also in the cinema, popular parties and so on. It's crazy.
Last Saturday we went to the theater to see a play that was really good. Last Saturday we went to the theater to see a play that was really good.
The actors were flawless, but I don't want to talk about thise play but instead about the sound in the plays.
The actors were flawless, but I don't want to talk about the play but instead about the sound in the plays.
For a reason I docan't knowunderstand, alls plays have some moments thatin which the sound is very, very, very high/loud.
For a reason I can't understand, all play have some moments in which the sound is very, very, very high/loud.
Imagine thant during a play the actors are talking with a normal soundvoices, and suddenly it comethere is a scene with a deafening sound.
Imagine that during a play the actors are talking with normal voices, and suddenly there is a scene with deafening sound.
For me are, these are a very unpleasing moments that does not make sense.
For me are, these are a very unpleasing moments that do not make sense.
This ussually occurs in the most of the theater plays in Barcelona, but also in the cinema, popular parties and so on.
This usually occurs in most of the theater plays in Barcelona, but also in the cinema, popular parties and so on.
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Good job!
Last Saturday we went to theater theatre to see a play that was really good.
Last Saturday we went to the theatre to see a play that was really good.
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Theatre - British English (Proper English)
The actors were flawless, buthowever, I don't want to talk about this play but about the sound in the plays.
The actors were flawless, however, I don't want to talk about this play but about sound in the plays.
Replace 'but' with however not to repeat the word too much
For asome reason I don't know, alls plays have some moments thatwhen the sound is very, very, verextraordinarily high.
For some reason I don't know, all plays have some moments when the sound is extraordinarily high.
I would use extraordinarily high or extremely high. It's not proper use to repeat a word so much
Imagine thant during a play the actors are talking with a normal sound, and then suddenly it comes a scene with a deafening sound.
Imagine that during a play the actors are talking with a normal sound, and then suddenly comes a scene with deafening sound.
For me are, these are a very unpleasing moments that does not make sense.
For me, these are very unpleasing moments that do not make sense.
This ussually occurs in the most of the theatere plays in Barcelona, but also in the cinema, popular parties, and so on.
This usually occurs in most theatre plays in Barcelona, but also in the cinema, popular parties, and so on.
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Well done! Pay attention to spelling and using the correct articles - definite/indefinite :3 Keep up the good work!
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Last Saturday we went to theater to see a play that was really good.
Last Saturday we went to the Theater - American English Theatre - British English (Proper English) Last Saturday we went to the theater to see a play that was really good. Last Saturday we went to the theater to see a play that was really good. |
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The actors were flawless, but I don't want to talk about this play but about the sound in the plays.
The actors were flawless, Replace 'but' with however not to repeat the word too much
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For a reason I don't know, alls plays have some moments that the sound is very, very, very high.
For I would use extraordinarily high or extremely high. It's not proper use to repeat a word so much
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Imagine than during a play the actors are talking with a normal sound, and suddenly it come a scene with a deafening sound.
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For me are, these are a very unpleasing moments that does not make sense.
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This ussually occurs in the most of the theater plays in Barcelona, but also in the cinema, popular parties and so on.
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