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I heard from one of my classmates that another classmate of mine was studying traditional Chinese medicine and he said that one day’s learning when you were young is more than your ten days learning when you are old. But the problem is that when you are young, you will probably don’t want to learn. When you want to learn something at your old age, your memory is too bad to remember it. What else can I say next?!

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Ridiculous


I heard from one of my classmates that another classmate of mine was studying traditional Chinese medicine and he said that one day’s learning when you were young is more than your ten days learning when you are old.


I heard from one of my classmates that another classmate of mine wais studying traditional Chinese medicine and h. That classmate said that one day’s of learning when you weare young is more than your ten days learning when you are old. I heard from one of my classmates that another classmate of mine is studying traditional Chinese medicine. That classmate said that one day of learning when you are young is more than ten days learning when you are old.

I heard from one of my classmates that another classmate of mine was studying traditional Chinese medicine and h. He said that one day’s learning when you were young is worth more than your ten days learning when you are old. I heard from one of my classmates that another classmate of mine was studying traditional Chinese medicine. He said that one day’s learning when you were young is worth more than ten days learning when you are old.

It makes sense the way you wrote it, but I think adding "worth" makes it sound more natural.

But the problem is that when you are young, you will probably don’t want to learn.


But the problem is that when you are young, you will probably don’t want to learn. But the problem is that when you are young, you probably don’t want to learn.

But the problem is that when you are young, you will probably don’t want to learn. But the problem is that when you are young, you probably don’t want to learn.

When you want to learn something at your old age, your memory is too bad to remember it.


When you want to learn something atin your old age, your memory is too bad to remember it. When you want to learn something in your old age, your memory is too bad to remember it.

What else can I say next?


What else can I say next? What else can I say?

I think this makes sense without the "next"

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