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Dec. 20, 2020

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Christmas letter

Yesterday I walked all day long looking for Santa Claus with my 3 years old son. To follow the tradition, children need to write a letter to Santa Claus and give it in hand whithin the days before christmas. But Barcelona has changed a lot on last year. The impact of covid in a tourism based city has been huge: closed shops and empty streets are now the picture of the city. However Christmas is magical and there are lots of activities to enjoy with childrens. We spent 3 hours looking for a Santa’s letter, we wrote it and finally we give it in hand to Santa Claus. A beautiful experience for a 3 years old kid who don’t understand nothing about covid.

Happy Christmas

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Yesterday I walked all day long looking for Santa Claus with my 3 years old son.

Christmas letter


Yesterday I walked all day long looking for Santa Claus with my 3 years old son.


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Yesterday I walked all day long looking for Santa Claus with my 3 years old son. Yesterday I walked all day long looking for Santa Claus with my 3 year old son.

To follow the tradition, children need to write a letter to Santa Claus and give it in hand whithin the days before christmas.


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I am not sure if you mean mail it, or give it to someone.

But Barcelona has changed a lot on last year.


But... Barcelona has changed a lot on last year.since Covid. ... Barcelona has changed a lot since Covid.

But Barcelona has changed a lot onin the last year. But Barcelona has changed a lot in the last year.

The impact of covid in a tourism based city has been huge: closed shops and empty streets are now the picture of the city.


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However Christmas is magical and there are lots of activities to enjoy with childrens.


HoweverDespite of it all, Christmas is still magical and there are still lots of activities to enjoy with childrens. Despite of it all, Christmas is still magical and there are still lots of activities to enjoy with children.

However Christmas is magical and there are lots of activities to enjoy with childrens. However Christmas is magical and there are lots of activities to enjoy with children.

We spent 3 hours looking for a Santa’s letter, we wrote it and finally we give it in hand to Santa Claus.


WFor instance, we spent 3 hours looking for a Santa’s letter, we wrote it and finally we give it in hand to Santa Clauswriting a letter to Santa, and then we hand delivered it to him. For instance, we spent 3 hours writing a letter to Santa, and then we hand delivered it to him.

We spent 3 hours looking for a Santa’s letter, we wrote it and finally we give it in hand to Santa Claus. We spent 3 hours looking for Santa’s letter, we wrote it and finally we give it to Santa Claus.

This sentence doesn't make too much sense to me.. if you were looking for it, but then wrote it, it didn't exist until you wrote it? again I am not sure what you meant by give it in hand - did you give it to a person? or mail it? or leave it somewhere for Santa?

A beautiful experience for a 3 years old kid who don’t understand nothing about covid.


AThis is such a beautiful experience for a 3 years old kichild who don’esn't understand noanything about covid. This is such a beautiful experience for a 3 years old child who doesn't understand anything about covid.

A beautiful experience for a 3 years old kid who doesn’t understand noanything about covid. A beautiful experience for a 3 year old kid who doesn’t understand anything about covid.

Happy Christmas


HappMerry Christmas Merry Christmas

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