This is my first time writing in English since June of last year june and I really want to take up English again 'cause I want to make my English sound perfect. This is my first time writing in English since June of last year and I really want to take up English again 'cause I want to make my English sound perfect.

I'm not marking it as wrong, but FYI 'cause is quite informal writing. Very common when spoken, fairly common on sites like Twitter (although these days I think "bc" is more common on Twitter, at least in my circles) but I definitely would not write it in an assignment for work or school.

This is my first time writing in English since last year jin June, and I really want to take up English again 'cause I want to make my English sound perfect. This is my first time writing in English since last year in June, and I really want to take up English again 'cause I want to make my English sound perfect.

This is my first time writing in English since June last year june and I really want to take up English again 'cause I want to make my English sound perfect. This is my first time writing in English since June last year and I really want to take up English again 'cause I want to make my English perfect.

Besides,Also because my English is rusty to be honest. Also because my English is rusty to be honest.

Besides, because my English is rusty to be honest. Besides, my English is rusty to be honest.

Besides,I started writing again also because my English is rusty to be honest. I started writing again also because my English is rusty to be honest.

I feel that it's a little more natural if you restate the topic of which you're explaining with because here.

Something that I really like to do is writing an entry by hand oin my notebook and then typeing it on my computer and posting it on langcorrect. Something that I really like to do is writing an entry by hand in my notebook and then typing it on my computer and posting it on langcorrect.

You need parallel constructions for the verbs. Something I like to do is writing [...] and typing [...] and posting [...].

Something that I really like to do is to writinge an entry by hand oin my notebook, and then type it on my computer and post it on langcorrect. Something that I really like to do is to write an entry by hand in my notebook, and then type it on my computer and post it on langcorrect.

I think that writing by hand makes me more conscious of what I'm trying to say and how to make it sound better. I think writing by hand makes me more conscious of what I'm trying to say and how to make it sound better.

Hello my name is Everially and let's see if I can reach a 50 -days streak. Hello my name is Everially and let's see if I can reach a 50-day streak.

Hello, my name is Everially and let's see if I can reach a 50 days streak. Hello, my name is Everially and let's see if I can reach a 50 days streak.