Aug. 12, 2025
Last weekend was fun , we with a friend go to sauna , we feels good in the weekend,
We swim to the water pool and drink sprite ,
After party I go in home . I very need sleep and my brother also.
This my first try, thanks.
My wWeekend
My Weekend
Generally, all words in a title are capitalised.
Last weekend was fun , we with a friend go to sauna , we. We went to a sauna with a friend which feelst good in the weekend,
We swiam toin the water pool and driank sSprite ,
A, then after the party I go inwent home .
Last weekend was fun. We went to a sauna with a friend which felt good in the weekend, swam in the pool and drank Sprite, then after the party I went home .
(1) I broke up the sentence into two. I think it flows better this way.
(2) I assume by "we" you're referring to your brother and yourself. If you're only referring to yourself, you'd use "I": "I went to a sauna with a friend".
(3) I took a guess at what you meant by "we feels good in the weekend". I assume you're talking about the sauna.
(4) "Sprite" is the name of a trademarked product and should be capitalised.
(5) The phrase is "go home" (or "went home" for the past tense).
I verreally need sleep and so does my brother also.
I really need sleep and so does my brother.
In this situation, we'd use "really" instead of "very".
This is my first try writing, thanks. This is my first try writing, thanks.
I suggest clarifying explicitly what it is that you're trying for the first time.
Feedback
Good job and keep going!!
Last weekend was fun , we went with a friend go to the sauna , we feels good in the weekend,
hich felt good.
We swiam toin the water pool and driank sprite ,
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After the party I go inwent home .
Last weekend was fun, we went with a friend to the sauna, which felt good.
We swam in the pool and drank sprite.
After the party I went home.
I verreally need sleep, and so does my brother also.
I really need sleep, and so does my brother.
This my first try, thanks.
Feedback
Good job, keep it up 👍
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My weekend
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Last weekend was fun , we with a friend go to sauna , we feels good in the weekend, We swim to the water pool and drink sprite , After party I go in home .
Last weekend was fun
Last weekend was fun (1) I broke up the sentence into two. I think it flows better this way. (2) I assume by "we" you're referring to your brother and yourself. If you're only referring to yourself, you'd use "I": "I went to a sauna with a friend". (3) I took a guess at what you meant by "we feels good in the weekend". I assume you're talking about the sauna. (4) "Sprite" is the name of a trademarked product and should be capitalised. (5) The phrase is "go home" (or "went home" for the past tense). |
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I very need sleep and my brother also.
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I In this situation, we'd use "really" instead of "very". |
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This my first try, thanks. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This is my first try writing, thanks. This is my first try writing, thanks. I suggest clarifying explicitly what it is that you're trying for the first time. |
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