Thanks for your time, I hope toI did it better this time. Thanks for your time, I hope I did it better this time.

Thanks for your time,. I hope to did itI wrote better this time. Thanks for your time. I hope I wrote better this time.

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Alternatively, you could say "haven't learned" instead of "didn't learn" if you want. Your last sentence was correct, but the extra "it" is clear though context, so it sounds a little unnatural.

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The first movie of ShrekShrek movie is one of my favorites. The first Shrek movie is one of my favorites.

Again, sounds more natural this way.

The first movie of ShrekShrek movie is one of my favorites. The first Shrek movie is one of my favorites.

It was so simple, funny, and breakingoke many stereotypes. It was so simple, funny, and broke many stereotypes.

It wais so simple, funny and breakings stereotypes. It is so simple, funny and breaks stereotypes.

During my childhood, I watched many times princess movies where the delicately and poor princcess find thes "true eternal love" with a refined and educated prince. During my childhood, I watched many princess movies where the delicate and poor princess finds "true eternal love" with a refined and educated prince.

During my childhood, I watched many times princess movies where the delicately and poor princcess find thes "true eternal love" with a refined and educated prince. During my childhood, I watched many princess movies where the delicate and poor princess finds "true eternal love" with a refined and educated prince.

Barbies movie's are a good example of this. Barbie movies are a good example of this.

Barbies movie's are a good example of this. Barbie movies are a good example of this.

Instead, Shrek isn't a prince, he isbut a lonely and sentimental ogre that falls in love with an unusual princess. Instead, Shrek isn't a prince, but a lonely and sentimental ogre that falls in love with an unusual princess.

Instead of "he is", adding "but" sounds more natural and emphasises the contrast between Shrek and the stereotypical prince.

Instead, Shrek isn't a prince,; he is a lonely and sentimental ogre thatwho falls in love with an unusual princess. Instead, Shrek isn't a prince; he is a lonely and sentimental ogre who falls in love with an unusual princess.

I know that there probably there is a lot of better examples about" how to break a stereotype", but as a child it was maybeare many better examples of this but as a child, Shrek was probably the first time I watched something that impacted me so much. I know that there probably are many better examples of this but as a child, Shrek was probably the first time I watched something that impacted me so much.

I know that probably there is a lot ofthere are probably better examples about" for "how to break a stereotype", but as a child, it was maybe the first time I watched something that impacted me so much. I know that there are probably better examples for "how to break a stereotype", but as a child, it was maybe the first time I watched something that impacted me so much.

Fiona is a realistic woman for me, instead of a perfect princess. Fiona is a realistic woman instead of a perfect princess.

She can protect herself, and fight. She can protect herself and fight.

She can protect herself, and fight. She can protect herself and fight.

She has good manners, but also enjoy to bes being more comfortable and less refinated (burping or eating rats, for example). She has good manners, but also enjoys being more comfortable and less refined (burping or eating rats, for example).

She has good manners but also enjoy to bes being more comfortable and less refinated (burping or eating rats, for example). She has good manners but also enjoys being more comfortable and less refined (burping or eating rats, for example).

She can feel angry, be uncomfortable, disagree with others, and reflect abouton her actions. She can feel angry, be uncomfortable, disagree with others, and reflect on her actions.

For example, when she heard the conversation of Shrek with Burro (Donkey I guess, I don't know what is his name in English is) about people criticizing and stigmatizing him because he's an ogre., For example, when she heard the conversation of Shrek with Burro (Donkey I guess, I don't know what his name in English is) about people criticizing and stigmatizing him because he's an ogre,

This sentence can be combined with the next one.

For example, when she heard the conversation ofbetween Shrek withand Burro (Donkey I guess, I don't know what is his name in English) about people criticizing and stigmatizing himShrek because he's an ogre, she regrets her actions and reflects on her words and how to be a better person. For example, when she heard the conversation between Shrek and Burro about people criticizing and stigmatizing Shrek because he's an ogre, she regrets her actions and reflects on her words and how to be a better person.

He is called "Donkey" in the English version. If you use "when" this way, then the phrase becomes a dependent clause and can't stand on its own, so I combined it with your next sentence.

Then she regrets, reflectings about her words, trying to be better after thatand tries to be kinder. Then she regrets, reflects about her words, and tries to be kinder.

"after that" is redundant, so it can be removed to sound more natural.

Then she regrets, reflecting about her words, trying to be better after that.

Combined with the previous sentence

Shrek is so antisocial in the beginning because of the world, and I know and understand that feeling. Shrek is so antisocial in the beginning because of the world, and I know and understand that feeling.

Shrek is so asocial in the beginning because of how the world, treats him, and I know and understand that feeling. Shrek is asocial in the beginning because of how the world treats him, and I know and understand that feeling.

The "terrible and ugly ogre" haves feelings, too. This fact changes your perspective and give ysends out a good lesson: Don't judge someone just for it'sby their appearance. The "terrible and ugly ogre" has feelings too. This fact changes your perspective and sends out a good lesson: Don't judge someone just by their appearance.

The "terrible and ugly ogre" haves feelings, and this fact changes your perspective and gives you a good lesson: Don't judge someone just for it'stheir appearance. The "terrible and ugly ogre" has feelings, and this fact changes your perspective and gives you a good lesson: Don't judge someone just for their appearance.

Shrek loved Fiona not because "she is a princess", he met her better,but he faelling in love with her because he really liked how was sheer personality. Shrek loved Fiona not because she is a princess, but he fell in love with her because he really liked her personality.

Not exactly sure what you meant by "he met her better" here.

Shrek loved Fiona not because "she is a princess", he met her better, falling in lovebut because he really liked how was sheer true personality. Shrek loved Fiona not because she is a princess, but because he really liked her true personality.

I'm not sure what you meant by "he met her better."

Fiona growew up alone in a tower, waiting for athe magical love ofrom the fairytales. Fiona grew up alone in a tower, waiting for the magical love from the fairytales.

Fiona growew up alone in a tower, waiting for a magical love ofut of a fairytales. Fiona grew up alone in a tower, waiting for a magical love out of a fairytale.

She didn't excluded Shrek because "he iwasn't a prince", but she loved him even knowing that he is an ogre and that she willould stay as an ogre. She didn't exclude Shrek because he wasn't a prince, but she loved him even knowing that he is an ogre and that she would stay as an ogre.

She didn't excluded Shrek because "he isn't a prince",; she loved him even knowing he is an ogre and that she will stay as an ogre. She didn't exclude Shrek because he isn't a prince; she loved him even knowing he is an ogre and that she will stay as an ogre.

They teachedaught me something that I didn't realized for a long time. They taught me something that I didn't realize for a long time.

They teachedaught me something that I dihadn't realized for a long time. They taught me something that I hadn't realized for a long time.

True love isn't perfect, and you don't need a perfect fairytale in real life to be happy. True love isn't perfect, and you don't need a perfect fairytale in real life to be happy.

Happiness is what matters, not being a perfect person in coupletogether with another perfect person. Happiness is what matters, not being a perfect person together with another perfect person.

Happiness is what matters, not being a perfect person in couplepaired with another perfect person. Happiness is what matters, not being a perfect person paired with another perfect person.

It's more important to enjoy your life thatn to be what people wants to you to be. It's more important to enjoy your life than to be what people want you to be.

It's more important to enjoy your life thatn to be what other people wants to you to be. It's more important to enjoy your life than to be what other people want you to be.

Burro (dDonkey I guess),) is a good friend. Burro (Donkey) is a good friend.

He's always trying to be nice, smiling and being funnyfunny and smile. He's always trying to be nice, funny and smile.

But he also can be angry, serious, sad and miss somelonely. But he also can be angry, serious, sad and lonely.

But he also can be angry, serious, sad, and miss someone. But he also can be angry, serious, sad, and miss someone.

Burro encouraged Shrek to don'tnot to give up withon Fiona. Burro encouraged Shrek not to give up on Fiona.

Burro encouraged Shrek to don'not give up with Fiona. Burro encouraged Shrek to not give up with Fiona.

That's a good example about how isof a genuine friend, someone who honestly cares and will helps you in difficult momenttimes. That's a good example of a genuine friend, someone who honestly cares and will help you in difficult times.

That's a good example about how isof how to be a genuine friend, someone who honestly cares and helps you in difficult moments. That's a good example of how to be a genuine friend, someone who honestly cares and helps you in difficult moments.

So, for all these reasons, I love this movie. So, for all these reasons, I love this movie.

So, fFor all these reasons I love this movie. For all these reasons I love this movie.

I admit that I'm not a cinephile,usually not one for movies, as usually it is disgusting for me to watch a movie. I admit that I'm usually not one for movies, as usually it is disgusting for me to watch a movie.

Not sure what you meant by cinephile exactly.

I admit that I'm not a cinephile, and usually, it's disgusting for me to watch a movie. I admit that I'm not a cinephile, and usually, it's disgusting for me to watch a movie.

Or: "I admit that I'm not a cinephile, and usually, I detest watching movies."

I feel really ashamed and clumsy thinking about how many errors I have againprobably have, but it's part of learning. I feel really ashamed and clumsy thinking about how many errors I probably have, but it's part of learning.

This just sounds a little more natural, but your original sentence works too.

I feel really ashamed and clumsy thinking about how many errors I have againmade, but it's part of learning. I feel really ashamed and clumsy thinking about how many errors I have made, but it's part of learning.