Sept. 14, 2021
Why don’t you dream big?
Few weeks ago I watched a video about an interview of a young entrepreneur.
He said a statement that stuck inside my head for so long.
He mentioned when he open his first shop at the age 25.
His uncle looks unsatisfied and said to his parent “why this kid don’t dream big”.
WTF!
Not only without any encouragement or appreciation.
Furthermore, that goal is too small and too easy to achieve!
On the other hand, I immediately think of myself.
In fact I also never dream big in my life.
But why I never dream big?
Finally, I figure out how to answer this question.
Is all because I am a weak person.
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Why don’t you dream big?
FA few weeks ago, I watched a video aboutof an interview ofwith a young entrepreneur.
A few weeks ago, I watched a video of an interview with a young entrepreneur.
Or just "I watched an interview with a young entrepreneur."
He said a statement that stuck inside my head for so long. He said a statement that stuck inside my head for so long.
More natural: "He said something that stuck in my head for so long."
He mentioned whenthat he opened his first shop at the age of 25.
He mentioned that he opened his first shop at the age of 25.
Or "at age 25."
His uncle looks unsatisfied and said to his parent “why, "Why doesn't this kid don’t dream big”.?"
His uncle looks unsatisfied and said to his parent, "Why doesn't this kid dream big?"
Unclear who "his parent" is - the uncle's parent or the entrepreneur's parent?
WTF!
Not only withoutHe didn't show any encouragement or appreciation.
He didn't show any encouragement or appreciation.
I think this is what you mean?
Furthermore, that goal is too small and too easy to achieve!
On the other hand, I immediately think of myself.
In fact, I also never dream big in my life. In fact, I also never dream big in my life.
But why don't I never dream big?
But why don't I ever dream big?
Finally, I figured out how tothe answer to this question.
Finally, I figured out the answer to this question.
"figure out the answer" = find the answer
"figure out how to answer" = find a WAY to find an answer
It is all because I am a weak person. It is all because I am a weak person.
I doubt it. Weaklings don't study English :) it's a tough language. you should give yourself some credit!
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Few weeks ago I watched a video about an interview of a young entrepreneur.
Or just "I watched an interview with a young entrepreneur." |
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He said a statement that stuck inside my head for so long. He said a statement that stuck inside my head for so long. He said a statement that stuck inside my head for so long. More natural: "He said something that stuck in my head for so long." |
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He mentioned when he open his first shop at the age 25.
He mentioned Or "at age 25." |
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His uncle looks unsatisfied and said to his parent “why this kid don’t dream big”.
His uncle looks unsatisfied and said to his parent Unclear who "his parent" is - the uncle's parent or the entrepreneur's parent? |
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WTF! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Not only without any encouragement or appreciation.
I think this is what you mean? |
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Furthermore, that goal is too small and too easy to achieve! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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On the other hand, I immediately think of myself. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In fact I also never dream big in my life. In fact, I also never dream big in my life. In fact, I also never dream big in my life. |
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But why I never dream big?
But why don't I |
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Finally, I figure out how to answer this question.
Finally, I figured out "figure out the answer" = find the answer "figure out how to answer" = find a WAY to find an answer |
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Is all because I am a weak person. It is all because I am a weak person. It is all because I am a weak person. I doubt it. Weaklings don't study English :) it's a tough language. you should give yourself some credit! |
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