Sept. 7, 2023
Dear Sarah,
I’m sorry that I didn’t write to you earlier, but I was really busy. I hope, you’re fine.
I decided to eat more healthily a couple of weeks ago because I became incredible motivated by yourself. You always say that: „Eating healthily is half succes”. I’ve already believed in that eating is very significant in our life.
At the beginning, I had bad feelings connected to my body, because of this I started to pay attention to my eating. I wanted to feel me fitter, more efficient and energetic. Additionally, I couldn’t study well, because I always wanted to eat something. It really bothered me. Now, I can focus on my lectures more well and I’d like to go to run or just walk an half our after ending my lessons.
Fortunately, I manage to keep my aim and every day I’ve breakfast and drink only one cup of coffee. It’s great succes for me. I eat vegetables and fruits regularly but less of sweets and chocolates in the same time. I consume fast food really rarely, but there is one day of the weeks that’s the „cheat day”.
Write to me as soon as!
Best wishes,
Lena
Eating more healthilyer
Eating healthier
To compare with "healthy," you say healthy, healthier, healthiest.
I hope, you’re fine.
I hope you’re fine.
No need for a comma.
I decided to eat more healthilyer a couple of weeks ago because I became incredible motivated by yourselfyou motivated me.
I decided to eat healthier a couple of weeks ago because you motivated me.
You always say that: „"Eating healthily is half of success.”.
You always say that: "Eating healthy is half of success.”
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I’ve already believed in that what we eating is very significant in our life.
I already believed that what we eat is very significant.
At the beginning, I had bad feelings connected to my body, b. Because of this, I started to pay attention to my eating.
At the beginning, I had bad feelings connected to my body. Because of this, I started to pay attention to my eating.
I wanted to feel me fitter, more efficient and energetic.
I wanted to feel fitter, more efficient and energetic.
It really bothered me.
Now, I can focus on my lectures more wellbetter, and I’d like to go to run or just walk an half our after ending my lessons are over.
Now, I can focus on my lectures better, and I like to run or just walk a half our after my lessons are over.
Fortunately, I manage to keep my aimto my goal, and every day I’ have breakfast and drink only one cup of coffee.
Fortunately, I manage to keep to my goal, and every day I have breakfast and drink only one cup of coffee.
It’s a great success for me. It’s a great success for me.
I eat vegetables and fruits regularly, but less of sweets and chocolates in the same time.
I eat vegetables and fruits regularly, but less sweets and chocolates.
I consume fast food reallvery rarely, but there is one day of the weeks that’s the „"cheat day”.”
I consume fast food very rarely, but there is one day of the week that’s the "cheat day.”
Write to me as soon as you can! Write to me as soon as you can!
Best wishes, Lena
I hope, you’re fine.
I hope you’re fine.
I hope you're well.
A couple of weeks ago, I decided to eat more healthily a couple of weeks ago because I became incredibley motivated by yourself.
A couple of weeks ago, I decided to eat more healthily because I became incredibly motivated by you.
You always say that: „"Eating healthily is half the succes”.s."
You always say: "Eating healthily is half the success."
I’ve already believed in that eating is very significant in our lifeves.
I already believed eating is very significant in our lives.
At the beginning, I had bad feelings connected to my body, b. Because of this, I started to pay attention to my eating.
At the beginning, I had bad feelings connected to my body. Because of this, I started to pay attention to my eating.
I wanted to feel me fitter, more efficient, and more energetic.
I wanted to feel fitter, more efficient, and more energetic.
Additionally, I couldn’t study well, because I always wanted to eat something.
Additionally, I couldn’t study well because I always wanted to eat something.
Now, I can focus on my lectures more wellbetter and I’d like to go to running or just walk anfor half an hour after ending my lessonclass ends.
Now, I can focus on my lectures better and I’d like to go running or just walk for half an hour after class ends.
Fortunately, I have managed to keep my aimotivation/my goal and every day I’ve breakfast and drink only one cup of coffee.
Fortunately, I have managed to keep motivation/my goal and every day I’ve breakfast and drink only one cup of coffee.
It’s great success for me. It’s great success for me.
I eat vegetables and fruits regularly butand less of sweets and chocolates inat the same time.
I eat vegetables and fruits regularly and less sweets and chocolates at the same time.
these are all considered good things, so I changed "but" to "and"
I rarely consume fast food really rarely, but there is one day of the weeks that’s the „cheat day”"cheat day” per week/every few weeks.
I rarely consume fast food, but there is one "cheat day” per week/every few weeks.
Write to me as soon as possible! Write to me as soon as possible!
"Write to me as soon as possible!" can sound a bit commanding.
You can also say: "I'd love it/I'd be happy if you could write to me as soon as you can!"
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Eating more healthily
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I hope, you’re fine.
I hope I hope you're well.
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I decided to eat more healthily a couple of weeks ago because I became incredible motivated by yourself.
A couple of weeks ago, I decided to eat more healthily
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You always say that: „Eating healthily is half succes”.
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I’ve already believed in that eating is very significant in our life.
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At the beginning, I had bad feelings connected to my body, because of this I started to pay attention to my eating.
At the beginning, I had bad feelings connected to my body
At the beginning, I had bad feelings connected to my body |
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I wanted to feel me fitter, more efficient and energetic.
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I wanted to feel |
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Additionally, I couldn’t study well, because I always wanted to eat something.
Additionally, I couldn’t study well |
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Now, I can focus on my lectures more well and I’d like to go to run or just walk an half our after ending my lessons.
Now, I can focus on my lectures
Now, I can focus on my lectures |
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Fortunately, I manage to keep my aim and every day I’ve breakfast and drink only one cup of coffee.
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It’s great succes for me. It’s great success for me. It’s great success for me. It’s a great success for me. It’s a great success for me. |
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I eat vegetables and fruits regularly but less of sweets and chocolates in the same time.
I eat vegetables and fruits regularly these are all considered good things, so I changed "but" to "and"
I eat vegetables and fruits regularly, but less |
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I consume fast food really rarely, but there is one day of the weeks that’s the „cheat day”.
I rarely consume fast food
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Write to me as soon as! Write to me as soon as possible! Write to me as soon as possible! "Write to me as soon as possible!" can sound a bit commanding. You can also say: "I'd love it/I'd be happy if you could write to me as soon as you can!" Write to me as soon as you can! Write to me as soon as you can! |
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