I'm student ofa high school student and I get up at 6.30 a.m., so I will not tell everyone that my life is very perfect and every day for me is an ideal day, but what is an ideal day for me and did ihave I ever haved such a day in my life? I'm a high school student and I get up at 6.30 a.m., so I will not tell everyone that my life is very perfect and every day for me is an ideal day, but what is an ideal day for me and have I ever had such a day in my life?

I'm student ofin high school and I get up at 6.30 a.m., so I will not tell everyone that my life is very perfect and every day for me is an ideal day, but what is an ideal day for me and did iI have such day in my life? I'm in high school and I get up at 6.30 a.m., so I will not tell everyone that my life is very perfect and every day for me is an ideal day, but what is an ideal day for me and did I have such day in my life?

I, I've, and I'm are always beginning in the capital letter.

I'm a student ofin high school and I get up at 6.30 a.m., so I will not tell everyonesay that my life is very perfect and that every day for me is an ideal day, but what is an ideal day for me and did iI have any such days in my life? I'm a student in high school and I get up at 6.30 a.m., so I will not say that my life is perfect and that every day for me is an ideal day, but what is an ideal day for me and did I have any such days in my life?

If we turn back to my birthday when I was 10., I guess it was a special day for me. If we turn back to my birthday when I was 10, I guess it was a special day for me.

If we turngo back to my birthday when I was 10. I guess it was a special day for me. If we go back to my birthday when I was 10. I guess it was a special day for me.

If we turn back to my birthday when I was 10., I guess ithat was a special day for me. If we turn back to my birthday when I was 10, I guess that was a special day for me.

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Is it 5 years ago? From your entry, I think it's 5 years ago.

I was sad and understood in that moment that I will have very boring birthday with my relatives, grandparents. I was sad and understood in that moment that I will have very boring birthday with my grandparents.

Can either say just relatives or just grandparents

I was sad and understood inat that moment that I willould have a very boring birthday with my relatives, and grandparents. I was sad and understood at that moment that I would have a very boring birthday with my relatives, and grandparents.

I was sad and understood inat that moment that I will have very boring birthday with my relatives, and grandparents. I was sad and understood at that moment that I will have very boring birthday with my relatives and grandparents.

Commas are only used for lists of more than 2 items

However when we arrived I had seensaw a shop where there were a lot of bikes and my parents said that I can choose one. However when we arrived I saw a shop where there were a lot of bikes and my parents said that I can choose one.

However, when we arrived I had seensaw a shop where there were a lot of bikes and my parents said that I canould choose one. However, when we arrived I saw a shop where there were a lot of bikes and my parents said that I could choose one.

You are to write in the past tense because it happened in the past.

However when we arrived I had seenaw a shop where there were a lot of bikes and my parents said that I canould choose one. However when we arrived I aw a shop where there were a lot of bikes and my parents said that I could choose one.

IOn that day I' d chosen the black, bigig, black bicycle and my siblings were in shock. On that day I chose the big, black bicycle and my siblings were in shock.

In tThat day, I' d choosend the big black, big bicycle and my siblings were in shocked. That day, I choosed the big black bicycle and my siblings were shocked.

There's an order by which we write adjectives. I can't remember now, but check it out.

IOn that day I' d chosen the a big black, big bicycle and my siblings were in shock. On that day I chose a big black bicycle and my siblings were in shock.

Adjective order is a really hard thing to explain as it's just something English speakers intuit and don't actually know is a rule, but black big bicycle sounds very unnatural, it's size then color.

Afterwards, I noticed that we were goingo to another place and I wanted to predict what is itt was and all my deductions were not so close to this placaccurate. Afterwards, I noticed that we were going to another place and I wanted to predict what it was and all my deductions were not accurate.

Afterwards, I noticed that we gowe went to another place and. I wanted to predict what is it andere we were going but all my deductions were not so close to this place. Afterwards, I noticed we went to another place. I wanted to predict where we were going but all my deductions were not so close to this place.

Afterwards, I noticed that we were going to go to another place, and I wanted to predict what is it andt would be, but all my deductions were not so close to this placee answer. Afterwards, I noticed that we were going to go to another place, and I wanted to predict what it would be, but all my deductions were not close to the answer.

Tenses are a little complicated as you're talking about something that is in the future from a perspective in the past.

When I remember my unique events and days, I start crying and thinking that my life is awful and uncolorfulboring now. When I remember my unique events and days, I start crying thinking that my life is awful and boring now.

When I remember my unique events and days, I start crying and thinking that my life is awful and uncolorfulinteresting now. When I remember my unique events and days, I start crying and thinking that my life is awful and uninteresting now.

People sometimes use colorful to mean "interesting and varied", but "uncolorful" is never used.

Firstly, my parents decided to make double surprise for me. Firstly, my parents decided to double surprise me.

Firstly, my parents decided to makprepare double surprises for me. Firstly, my parents decided to prepare double surprises for me.

Firstly, my parents decided to make doubletwo surprises for me. Firstly, my parents decided to make two surprises for me.

I am enjoyed of beloved bicycles and I had a little bike untill I became 10 years old girl, sowas 10, so on my 10th birthday my siblings and parents kept silent and said that we needed to go to relatives who live in another city. I loved bicycles and I had a little bike until I was 10, so on my 10th birthday my siblings and parents kept silent and said that we needed to go to relatives who live in another city.

Makes it more clear that this happened on your 10th birthday.

I am enjoyed oflove beicycles and I had a little bike untill I becamewas 10 years old girl, so my siblings and parents kept silent and said that we need to go tovisit our relatives who live in another city. I love bicycles and I had a little bike until I was 10 years old, so my siblings and parents kept silent and said that we need to visit our relatives who live in another city.

I am enjoyefond of beicycles and I had a little bike untill I became 10 years old girl, so m. My siblings and parents kept silent and said that we need to go to relatives who live in another city. I am fond of bicycles and I had a little bike until I became 10 years old. My siblings and parents kept silent and said that we need to go to relatives who live in another city.

"So" doesn't make too much sense here as the cause and effect between the first and second clause is not very strong. In a sense the rest of this piece is because of your fondness for bicycles and the fact that you had a small bike, but this specific sentence isn't strongly linked to that fact.

after the aquapark we seat at my aunt's home, ate cake and dreank very hot tea! after the aquapark we sat at my aunt's home, ate cake and drank very hot tea!

aAfter visiting the aquapark, we seat atwent to my aunt's home, ate cake and dreank very hot tea! After visiting the aquapark, we went to my aunt's home, ate cake and drank very hot tea!

aAfter the aquapark we (hung out/seat) at aunt's home, ate cake and dreank very hot tea! After the aquapark we (hung out/sat) at aunt's home, ate cake and drank very hot tea!

While "sat" might be correct as what you were literally doing, English speakers wouldn't describe it like this, they'd say hung out

It iwas my favourite day and I have never forgotten about it! It was my favourite day and I have never forgotten about it!

It iwas my favourite day and I have never forgotten about it! It was my favourite day and I have never forgotten about it!

When I view photos from my 10-ths birthday, I smile and I can see plenty of memories from that day. When I view photos from my 10th birthday, I smile and I can see plenty of memories from that day.

When I view photos from 10-thmy 10-years birthday, I smile and I can see plenty of memories from that day. When I view photos from my 10-years birthday, I smile and I can see plenty of memories from that day.

When I view photos from my 10-ths birthday, I smile and I can see plenty of memories from that day. When I view photos from my 10th birthday, I smile and can see plenty of memories from that day.

I hope that people in my life and you will have your ideal days often and often. I hope that people in my life and you will have your ideal days often.

I hope that the people in my life and you will have your ideal days often andvery often. I hope that the people in my life and you will have your ideal days very often.

I hope that people in my life and yours will have your ideal days often and often. I hope that people in my life and yours will have your ideal days often.

In my opinion people who have good and positive moods every day, have a lot of energy and many such ideal days like miney day! In my opinion people who have good and positive moods every day, have a lot of energy and many ideal days like my day!

In my opinion, people who have good and positive moods every day, have a lot of energy and many such ideal days like mine day! In my opinion, people who have good and positive moods every day, have a lot of energy and many such ideal days like mine day!

In my opinion people who have good anda positive moosd every day, have a lot of energy and have many such ideal days like miney day! In my opinion people who have a positive mood every day, have a lot of energy and have many such ideal days like my day!

When we arrived I saw the name of the place and it was the biggest and the most beautiful aquapark in the city. When we arrived I saw the name of the place and it was the biggest and most beautiful aquapark in the city.

When we came i was very surprised a lot, because there were so many huge waterslides and pools. When we came i was very surprised, because there were so many huge waterslides and pools.

When we came iI was very surprised a lot, because there were so many huge waterslides and pools. When we came I was very surprised, because there were so many huge waterslides and pools.

When we came iI was very surprised a lot, because there were so many huge waterslides and pools. When we came I was very surprised, because there were so many huge waterslides and pools.

By the way, the aquapark washad been my dream from early childhood, because I like water and my parents never hadn't time to go there with me there. By the way, the aquapark had been my dream from early childhood, because I like water and my parents never had time to go there with me.

By the way, the aquapark was my dream from early childhood, because I like water andbut my parents hadn't time to go with me there. By the way, the aquapark was my dream from early childhood, because I like water but my parents hadn't time to go with me there.

By the way, the aquapark was my dreamsomething I dreamed about from early childhood, because I like water and my parents hadn't time to go with me there. By the way, the aquapark was something I dreamed about from early childhood, because I like water and my parents hadn't time to go with me there.

To say something was "your dream" implies it's your biggest wish or your goal. It's a very strong statement, and I think stronger than you meant here.

Also I met my relatives and cousins, so I spent my time there with them and we haunged out a lot. Also I met my relatives and cousins, so I spent my time there with them and we hung out a lot.

Also I met my relatives and cousins, so I spent my time there with them and we hanged out a lot. Also I met my relatives and cousins, so I spent my time there with them and we hanged out a lot.

AI also I met my relatives and cousins, so I spent my time there with them and we haunged out a lot. I also met my relatives and cousins, so I spent my time there with them and we hung out a lot.

My aunt baked a cake for me and it was so cute. My aunt baked a cake for me and it was so cute.

My aunt had baked a cake for me and it was so cute. My aunt had baked a cake for me and it was so cute.