My bBrother My Brother

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Hello ! Hello!

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Hello ! Hello!

I have onea little brother. I have a little brother.

I have onea little brother. I have a little brother.

Our relationships is very strange. Our relationship is very strange.

Our relationships is very strange. Our relationship is very strange.

When we are only together by ourselves, we are so cute towards each other. When we are together by ourselves, we are so cute towards each other.

When we are onlyalone together, we are so cute towards each other. When we are alone together, we are so cute towards each other.

I might suggest "sweet" instead of "cute" here

When we are onlyalone together, we are so cutvery nice towards each other. When we are alone together, we are very nice towards each other.

But when we are with our parents, he his so eannoying ! But when we are with our parents, he is so annoying !

But when we are with our parents, he his so eannoying ! But when we are with our parents, he is so annoying!

But when we are with our parents, he his so eannoying ! But when we are with our parents, he is so annoying!

But I mean really ! I mean really!

"But" is not used so much for emphasis like "mais" is in French

He puts all of his time to critiscize me to jocke, but everytime it's tiresome every time! He puts all of his time to criticize me to jocke, but it's tiresome every time!

I'm not sure what you mean by 'to jocke', so I'm not sure how to correct it

He putspends all (of) his time to critiscizeing me to jocke, but everytime it' around, but it's always tiresome ! He spends all (of) his time criticizing me to joke around, but it's always tiresome!

This "of" is optional. When you are kidding someone / being silly, it can be described as "joking around"

He putspends all of his time to critisize me to jocke, but everytimecising me, joking all the time and it's tiresome ! He spends all of his time to criticising me, joking all the time and it's tiresome !

It's because I'm so happy when he his not here ahahah. It's because I'm so happy when he is not here ahahah.

IThat's becausewhy I'm so happy when he his not here, ahahah. That's why I'm so happy when he his not here, ahahah.

For posterity, of course we would not spell out laughter in formal writing, but it's a very normal thing to do in general on the internet

It's becauseSo, I'm sovery happy when he his not here ahahah. So, I'm very happy when he his not here ahahah.

So, my relationships with him are, inis, the majority of the time, bad... no, very bad. So, my relationship with him is, the majority of the time, bad... no, very bad.

So, my relationships with him are, inis, the majority of the time, bad... no, very bad. So, my relationship with him is, the majority of the time, bad... no, very bad.

"Most of the time" would be a bit more natural than "the majority of the time"

So, my relationships with him are, in the majority of the time,is on the whole bad... but no,t very bad. or terrible So, my relationship with him is on the whole bad... but not very bad or terrible

But, sometimes, we find commun pointthings in common, like a film that we liked or activity which we want to do. But, sometimes, we find things in common, like a film that we liked or activity which we want to do.

But, sometimes, we find commun poina shared interest, like a film (that) we liked, or an activity which we want to do. But sometimes we find a shared interest, like a film (that) we liked, or an activity which we want to do.

A "shared interest" would be more natural to say than a "common point"

But, sometimes, we find commun pointthings in common, like a film that we liked or an activity wich we want to do. But, sometimes, we find things in common, like a film that we liked or an activity wich we want to do.

In therose times it's pleasant. In those times it's pleasant.

InDuring therose times, it's pleasant. During those times, it's pleasant.

InAt therose times it's pleasangreat. At those times it's great.

Goodbye ! Goodbye!