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HelenSnow

Sept. 14, 2025

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I don't understand why drinking alcohol and smoking cigarettes are normalized.

People get drunk at every celebration. Why do they do that? Is it impossible to have fun without alcoholic beverages? They say it's for relaxation. Perhaps you should figure out why you are so tense? It would make your life better, which cannot be said about constant drinking.

Smoking is the most common excuse to take a break. A bunch of people gather and go smoking. People don't perceive it as laziness! Moreover, if most of the colleagues go smoking but you don't, you often feel like a black sheep. My dean of the journalism department said that if you want to be a journalist and you don’t smoke, it's time to start because smoking helps people to get along. He assured us we would know more if we smoked with someone important. Drinking, from his point of view, is even better for communication.

I don’t work as a journalist but I still have to face normalizing these bad habits. I don't like corporate parties either.

When I was a schoolgirl and later a student, I felt uncomfortable because I didn't go to any party and I thought: "Perhaps I'm just boring?" I realized that I wasn't boring, I was just bored. It's not interesting for me at all.

I would rather do some exercises than smoke at work. I prefer training to parties. There's nothing wrong with me. I hope some day people will normalize my choice too.

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Sept. 18, 2025

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Is it impossible to have fun without alcoholic beverages?


Is it impossible to have fun without alcoholic beverages? Is it impossible to have fun without alcohol?

same here, your sentence is still correct

Bad habits


I don't understand why drinking alcohol and smoking cigarettes are normalized.


I don't understand why drinking alcohol and smoking cigarettes are normalized. I don't understand why drinking alcohol and smoking cigarettes are normalized.

you could also say simply "drinking and smoking", it's very common in casual speech

People get drunk at every celebration.


Why do they do that?


They say it's for relaxation.


They say it's forthey drink so they can relaxation. They say they drink so they can relax.

grammatically there is nothing really wrong, I'm just offering another option of how someone might say it

Perhaps you should figure out why you are so tense?


It would make your life better, which cannot be said about constant drinking.


It would make your life better, which cannot be said aboutunlike constant drinking. It would make your life better, unlike constant drinking.

Smoking is the most common excuse to take a break.


A bunch of people gather and go smoking.


People don't perceive it as laziness!


People don't perceive it as laziness! People don't perceive it as laziness!

Moreover, if most of the colleagues go smoking but you don't, you often feel like a black sheep.


Moreover, if most of theyour colleagues go smoking but you don't, you often feel like a black sheep. Moreover, if most of your colleagues go smoking but you don't, you often feel like a black sheep.

My dean of the journalism department said that if you want to be a journalist and you don’t smoke, it's time to start because smoking helps people to get along.


My dean of the journalism department said that if you want to be a journalist and you don’t smoke, it's time to start because smoking helps people to get along. My dean of the journalism department said that if you want to be a journalist and you don’t smoke, it's time to start because smoking helps people get along.

He assured us we would know more if we smoked with someone important.


Drinking, from his point of view, is even better for communication.


I don’t work as a journalist but I still have to face normalizing these bad habits.


I don’t work as a journalist but I still have to facdeal with the normalizingation of these bad habits. I don’t work as a journalist but I still have to deal with the normalization of these bad habits.

I don't like corporate parties either.


I don't likeenjoy corporate parties either. I don't enjoy corporate parties either.

When I was a schoolgirl and later a student, I felt uncomfortable because I didn't go to any party and I thought: "Perhaps I'm just boring?"


I realized that I wasn't boring, I was just bored.


It's not interesting for me at all.


It's noParties and drinking don't interesting for me at all. Parties and drinking don't interest me at all.

I would rather do some exercises than smoke at work.


I prefer training to parties.


I prefer training to parties. I prefer training to parties.

There's nothing wrong with me.


I hope some day people will normalize my choice too.


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