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vuongnguyen

June 6, 2023

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MY ROUTINES

I usually wake up at 5:30 A.M and get up 6:00 A.M. After that, I wash my face and brush my teeth. I have bread for breakfast. I get work at 8: 20 A.M. I have lunch with co-workers at 12:00 o'clock. I come back to work 1: 00 P.M. I finish work at 5:30 P.M and get home at 6:00 P.M. In the evening, I go jogging in the park near my house. Sometimes, I play soccer with my friends on weekdays. I have a English class on monday, wednesday and friday. After go to bed I read a book and learn English. I go to bed at 11: 30 P.M.

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I usually wake up at 5:30 A.M and get up 6:00 A.M. After that, I wash my face and brush my teeth.

I have bread for breakfast.

I finish work at 5:30 P.M and get home at 6:00 P.M.

In the evening, I go jogging in the park near my house.

Sometimes, I play soccer with my friends on weekdays.

I go to bed at 11: 30 P.M.

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vuongnguyen

June 6, 2023

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MY ROUTINES

I usually wake up at 5:30 A.M and get up 6:00 A.M. After that, I wash my face and brush my teeth.

I have bread for breakfast.

I get work at 8: 20 A.M.

I have lunch with co-workers at 12:00 o'clock.

I come back to work 1: 00 P.M.

I finish work at 5:30 P.M and get home at 6:00 P.M.

In the evening, I go jogging in the park near my house.

Sometimes, I play soccer with my friends on weekdays.

I go to bed at 11: 30 P.M.

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meekiezee

June 6, 2023

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vuongnguyen

June 6, 2023

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Overall very good grammar and sentence structure, but it can be better with less short sentences and more combined longer sentences.

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I usually wake up at 5:30 A.M and get up 6:00 A.M. After that, I wash my face and brush my tooth.


I have bread for breakfast.


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I get work at 8: 20 A.M.


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I geto to work at 8: 20 A.M. I go to work at 8: 20 A.M.

I have lunch with co-workers at 12:00 o'clock.


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I have lunch with my co-workers at 12:00 o'clock. I have lunch with my co-workers at 12:00 o'clock.

I come back to work 1: 00 P.M.


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I come back to work at 1: 00 P.M. I come back to work at 1: 00 P.M.

I finish work at 5:30 P.M and get home at 6:00 P.M.


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In the evening, I go jogging in the park near my house.


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Sometimes, I play soccer with my friends on weekdays.


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I have a English class on monday, wednesday and friday.


I have an English class on mMonday, wWednesday and fFriday. I have an English class on Monday, Wednesday and Friday.

1. Days of the week need to be capitalized 2. The indefinite article a changes to an when it is in front of a vowel

I have a English class on mMonday, wWednesday and fFriday. I have a English class on Monday, Wednesday and Friday.

After go to bed I read a book and learn English.


After I go to bed I read a book and learn English. After I go to bed I read a book and learn English.

Depends what you are trying to say, this sentence can either be 1. After, I go to bed, read a book, and learn English. or 2. After I go to bed, I read a book and learn English.

AfterBefore I go to bed, I read a book and learn English. Before I go to bed, I read a book and learn English.

I think that you meant before you go to bed, since you can't read a book and learn English while you are sleeping.

I go to bed at 11: 30 P.M.


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I usually wake up at 5:30 A.M and get up 6:00 A.M. After that, I wash my face and brush my teeth.


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