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My new friend

Recently I am pleased to use Instagram since I made a new friend on it. She is E and from Mexico. I want to travel Mexico since I watched the movie <Coco>. As I know E better, I find out surprisely we share many common for example we both like metal musics and horror movies.


这几天我一直在使用Instagram,因为我在Instagram上认识了一位新朋友,来自墨西哥的E。自从看了电影《Coco》之后,我就对墨西哥充满了憧憬。随着我对E的进一步了解,我发现我们有许多共同的爱好,比如都喜欢听金属乐,看恐怖电影。

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