March 16, 2020
There are four persons in my family.
Naturally, it's my mother, father, and also it's my sister and me.
My sister is named Kristina. Kristina has the same age as I. We are twins.
We were born in a man's holiday.
It's Russian holiday - Defenders of the Fatherland Day.
I and Kristina are already adults and we live without our parents.
I live and work in another city and Kristina lives in one city with our parents.
She has two daughters. And my mother helps her to care for them.
Our family relationship is not as bad but not great.
I think, our relationship is just normal. But I rarely ring to my parents.
And I don't talk much with Kristina.
Only if I see her when I will be at home visiting my parents.
I don't know why this that. Maybe It's no interest for me how she lives.
I try to go to hometown at least twice a month.
В моей семье 4 человека.
Конечно же, это моя мать, отец, а также моя сестра и я.
Мою сестру зовут Кристина. У нее такой же возраст, как и мой. Мы двойняшки.
Мы родились в мужской праздник. Это российский праздник - День защитника отечества.
Я и Кристина уже взрослые и мы живем без родителей.
Я живу и работаю в друг городе, а Кристина живет в одном городе с родителями.
У нее есть две дочки. И моя мама помогает ей ухаживать за ними.
Наша семейные отношения не плохие, но и не отличные. Я бы сказал, просто нормальные.
но я редко звоню моим родителям. А с Кристиной я почти не общаюсь. Только если увижу её, когда буду дома в гостях у родителей.
Я не знаю почему это так. Может быть мне не интересно как она живет.
Я стараюсь приезжать домой к родителям хотя бы два раза в месяц.
Family relationships
There are four personsople in my family.
There are four people in my family.
Normally, you don't write "persons". It's one of those weird plurals. Although you *can* sometimes see persons, it's quite rare.
Naturally, it'sthey are my mother, father, and also it's my sister, and meI.
Naturally, they are my mother, father, my sister, and I.
My sister is named Kristina.
Kristina hasand I are the same age as I.
Kristina and I are the same age.
I'm not sure how Russian works, but I know that in French, age is something that you "have". In English, however, it is a state of being (you conjugate the verb to be).
We were born ion a man's holiday.
We were born on a holiday.
It's a Russian holiday - Defenders of the Fatherland Day. It's a Russian holiday - Defenders of the Fatherland Day.
I and Kristina arend I already now adults, and we live without our parents.
Kristina and I are now adults, and we live without our parents.
I live and work in another city and whilst Kristina lives in onthe same city withas our parents.
I live and work in another city and whilst Kristina lives in the same city as our parents.
She has two daughters. and my mother helps her care for them.
She has two daughters and my mother helps her care for them.
AShe has two daughters and my mother helps her to care for them.
She has two daughters and my mother helps her care for them.
I'm just joining the sentences together, as they would fit in as a compound sentence.
Our family relationship is not as bad, but it's not great either.
Our family relationship is not bad, but it's not great either.
I think, our relationship is just normal.
I think our relationship is just normal.
But I rarely ring tocall my parents and I don't talk much with Kristina.
I rarely call my parents and I don't talk much with Kristina.
I haven't really met anyone who says "ring". It is kind of outdated. As mentioned above, I just merged the two sentences.
AI rarely call my parents and I don't talk much with Kristina.
I rarely call my parents and I don't talk much with Kristina.
Only if II only see her when I will be at home'm visiting my parents.
I only see her when I'm visiting my parents.
I don't know why this'm not sure why it's like thatis.
I'm not sure why it's like this.
Maybe It's have no interest for mein how she lives.
Maybe I have no interest in how she lives.
I try to go to my hometown at least twice a month. I try to go to my hometown at least twice a month.
Family relationships
There are four personsople in my family.
There are four people in my family.
Naturally, it's my mother, father, and also it's my sister and meI.
Naturally, it's my mother, father, my sister and I.
What do you mean when you say, "Naturally"?
My sister is named Kristina.
Kristina hasand I are the same age as I.
Kristina and I are the same age.
We are twins.
We were born ion a man's holiday.
We were born on a holiday.
It's a Russian holiday - Defenders of the Fatherland Day. It's a Russian holiday - Defenders of the Fatherland Day.
I and Kristina arend I already now adults and we live without our parents.
Kristina and I are now adults and we live without our parents.
I live and work in another city and Kristina lives in onthe same city withas our parents.
I live and work in another city and Kristina lives in the same city as our parents.
You mentioned that Kristina doesn't live with your parents as well. So it's important to clarify that in this sentence. When you say, "Kristina lives in one city with our parents", it implies she's still living with them. But if you say, "Kristina lives in the same city as our parents", it says that she lives in that city that your parents also live, but not together under one roof.
She has two daughters.
AShe has two daughters and my mother helps her to care for them.
She has two daughters and my mother helps her to care for them.
Never start a sentence with 'and'. You can connect the two sentences together instead.
Our family relationship is not as bad but not great.
Our family relationship is not as bad as most families but not great.
Our family relationship is not as bad as my neighbors but it's also not great.
Our family relationship is not bad but not great.
Our family relationship is not as bad as most families but not great.
Our family relationship is not as bad as my neighbors but it's also not great.
When you use, "as bad", you have to specify, "as bad as what?". A comparison is needed.
I think, our relationship is just normal.
I think our relationship is just normal.
But I rarely ring tocall my parents.
But I rarely call my parents.
A.... and I don't talk much with Kristina.
.... and I don't talk much with Kristina.
Join 'and' sentences.
OnlyI only talk to her if I see her when I will be at home visiting my parents's home.
I only talk to her if see her when I will be visiting my parent's home.
I don't know why thisit's like thatis.
I don't know why it's like this.
Maybe Iit's because it's no interest forto me how she lives.
Maybe it's because it's no interest to me how she lives.
I try to go to my hometown at least twice a month. I try to go to my hometown at least twice a month.
Family relationships
There are four personsople in my family.
There are four people in my family.
Naturally, it's my mother, father, and also it's my sister and me.
Naturally, it's my mother, father, my sister and me.
My sister is named Kristina.
Kristina has the same age as Ime.
Kristina has the same age as me.
We are twins.
We were born ion a man's holiday.
We were born on a holiday.
It's a Russian holiday - Defenders of the Fatherland Day. It's a Russian holiday - Defenders of the Fatherland Day.
I and Kristina are already adults and we live without our parents.
I live and work in another city andwhile Kristina lives in onthe city with our parents.
I live and work in another city while Kristina lives in the city with our parents.
She has two daughters and my mother helps her to care for them. She has two daughters and my mother helps her to care for them.
And my mother helps her to care for them.
Our family relationship is not as bad but not great.
Our family relationship is not bad but not great.
I think, our relationship is just normal but I rarely ring my parents.
I think our relationship is just normal but I rarely ring my parents.
ring → call
works as well
But I rarely ring to my parents.
And II also don't talk much with Kristina.
I also don't talk much with Kristina.
Only if II only see her when I will beam at home visiting my parents.
I only see her when I am at home visiting my parents.
I don't know why this thatit is like this.
I don't know why it is like this.
Maybe Iit's because I have no interest for mein how she lives.
Maybe it's because I have no interest in how she lives.
I try to go toback to my hometown at least twice a month.
I try to go back to my hometown at least twice a month.
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There are four persons in my family.
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There are four pe
There are four pe Normally, you don't write "persons". It's one of those weird plurals. Although you *can* sometimes see persons, it's quite rare. |
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Naturally, it's my mother, father, and also it's my sister and me.
Naturally, it's my mother, father,
Naturally, it's my mother, father, What do you mean when you say, "Naturally"?
Naturally, |
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My sister is named Kristina. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Kristina has the same age as I.
Kristina has the same age as
Kristina
Kristina I'm not sure how Russian works, but I know that in French, age is something that you "have". In English, however, it is a state of being (you conjugate the verb to be). |
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We are twins. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We were born in a man's holiday.
We were born
We were born
We were born |
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It's Russian holiday - Defenders of the Fatherland Day. It's a Russian holiday - Defenders of the Fatherland Day. It's a Russian holiday - Defenders of the Fatherland Day. It's a Russian holiday - Defenders of the Fatherland Day. It's a Russian holiday - Defenders of the Fatherland Day. It's a Russian holiday - Defenders of the Fatherland Day. It's a Russian holiday - Defenders of the Fatherland Day. |
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I and Kristina are already adults and we live without our parents. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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I live and work in another city and Kristina lives in one city with our parents.
I live and work in another city
I live and work in another city and Kristina lives in You mentioned that Kristina doesn't live with your parents as well. So it's important to clarify that in this sentence. When you say, "Kristina lives in one city with our parents", it implies she's still living with them. But if you say, "Kristina lives in the same city as our parents", it says that she lives in that city that your parents also live, but not together under one roof.
I live and work in another city and whilst Kristina lives in |
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She has two daughters. She has two daughters and my mother helps her to care for them. She has two daughters and my mother helps her to care for them. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
She has two daughters |
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And my mother helps her to care for them.
Never start a sentence with 'and'. You can connect the two sentences together instead.
I'm just joining the sentences together, as they would fit in as a compound sentence. |
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Our family relationship is not as bad but not great.
Our family relationship is not
Our family relationship is not When you use, "as bad", you have to specify, "as bad as what?". A comparison is needed.
Our family relationship is not |
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I think, our relationship is just normal.
I think ring → call works as well
I think
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But I rarely ring to my parents.
But I rarely
I haven't really met anyone who says "ring". It is kind of outdated. As mentioned above, I just merged the two sentences. |
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And I don't talk much with Kristina.
Join 'and' sentences.
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Only if I see her when I will be at home visiting my parents.
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I don't know why this that.
I don't know why
I don't know why
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Maybe It's no interest for me how she lives.
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Maybe
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I try to go to hometown at least twice a month.
I try to go I try to go to my hometown at least twice a month. I try to go to my hometown at least twice a month. I try to go to my hometown at least twice a month. I try to go to my hometown at least twice a month. |
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Family relationships This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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