Nov. 19, 2021
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I am 54 now.
Yesterday, I had worked for 16 hours plus.
One is full time job (23:00-0700) the other is part time job (08:00-16:00).
So, don’t worry I am not into any debt.
I just want to test my physical limit.
I usually do that when I was younger. (2X)
But, in our life apart from tax, death can’t avoid ageing is also unavoidable.
After working for such long hours.
As soon as I return home the only thing in mind was “sleep”.
I immediately enter to a coma mode.
I don’t think I will do that again and I also admit that I am an old man now.
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I am 54 now.
Yesterday, I had worked for over 16 hours plus.
One isI worked at a full -time job (23:00-0700) the other isas well as a part -time job (08:00-16:00).
So, dDon’t worry, I am not into any debt.
I just want to test my physical limits.
I usually do thatdid that often when I was younger.
But, in our life apart from tax, death can’t avoid ageing is also unavoidableIn life not only can we not avoid death and taxes, but also aging.
After working for such long hours.,
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Aas soon as I returngot home the only thing inon my mind was “sleep”.
I immediately wenter to a into coma mode.
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I am 54 now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yesterday, I had worked for 16 hours plus. Yesterday |
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One is full time job (23:00-0700) the other is part time job (08:00-16:00).
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So, don’t worry I am not into any debt.
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I just want to test my physical limit. I just want to test my physical limits. |
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I usually do that when I was younger. I |
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(2X) |
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But, in our life apart from tax, death can’t avoid ageing is also unavoidable.
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After working for such long hours. After working for such long hours I think this and the next bit go together, so they should be joined with a comma. "After working for such long hours" is not a complete sentence on its own. |
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As soon as I return home the only thing in mind was “sleep”.
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I immediately enter to a coma mode. I immediately went |
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I don’t think I will do that again and I also admit that I am an old man now. |
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