In Japan, two big elections are scheduled in June and July inof 2025. In Japan, two big elections are scheduled in June and July of 2025.

Alternately: ". . . in June and July of this year."

In Japan, two big elections are scheduled in June and July inof 2025. In Japan, two big elections are scheduled in June and July of 2025.

In Japan, two big elections are scheduled in June and July in 2025. In Japan, two big elections are scheduled in June and July 2025.

They are the Tokyo Council Election and the House of Councillors Election. They are the Tokyo Council Election and the House of Councillors Election.

They are the Tokyo Council Eelection, and the House of Councillors Eelection. They are the Tokyo Council election, and the House of Councillors election.

Slight grammar changes.

They are the Tokyo Council Eelection and the House of Councillors Eelection. They are the Tokyo Council election and the House of Councillors election.

They will bare held continuously, this timing is pregularly once every 12 years! They are held regularly once every 12 years!

"Are held" means that the elections have occurred in the cast and continue to occur regularly into the present and future. "Will be held" means that something has never taken place before in the past and will start either in the present or sometime in the future and will continue to occur regularly into the future.

They will bare held continuously, this timing is pregularly, every 12 years! They are held regularly, every 12 years!

"continuously" means they are taking place at every moment. "regularly" means they happen once, every 12 years.

They will bse held continuously, this timing is pections are held every 12 years!. These elections are held every 12 years.

more natural sounding.

They will be held continuoussecutively (concurrently), this timing isonly happens once per 12 years! They will be held consecutively (concurrently), this timing only happens once per 12 years!

"consecutively" means one after the other. "concurrently" means at the same time. I think you mean consecutively here, but just listing concurrently as an option in case I understood it wrong.

On the other hand, I have a concern about Japanese elections and young people. On the other hand, I have a concern about Japanese elections and young people.

On the other hand, I have aI am however concerned about the Japanese election and young people. I am however concerned about the Japanese election and young people.

You would only say "on the other hand" if you had already made any argument, but you have only stated facts so far.

On the other hand, I have a concern about Japanese elections and young people. On the other hand, I have a concern about Japanese elections and young people.

Recently, the Japanese younger generation isn’t interested in elections. Recently, the Japanese younger generation isn’t interested in elections.

Recently, Japanese younger isn’th are not interested in elections. Recently, Japanese youth are not interested in elections.

"younger" is an adjective, "youth" is a noun

Recently,The Japanese younger isn’tth have no interested in the elections. The Japanese youth have no interest in the elections.

You don't need 'recently'.

Recently, younger Japanese younger ispeople aren’t interested in elections. Recently, younger Japanese people aren’t interested in elections.

"Younger" isn't a noun and you need a noun here, so brought "people" in as the noun and moved "younger" to an adjective. Since people are plural, changed "isn't" to "aren't".

I guess that they think elections are not important for them. I guess they think elections are not important for them.

"that" is not incorrect but it is better to omit in this case.

I guess that they think elections are of not important force to them. I guess that they think elections are of no importance to them.

I guess that they think elections are non't important for them. I guess that they think elections aren't important for them.

More natural to use the abbreviated "aren't important" or the negative noun "are unimportant" than "are not important", though grammatically they're all correct.

It’s very risky because the consequences of election is affect their futures! It’s very risky because the consequences of elections affect their futures!

plural since you are talking about a group of people (the youth)

It’s very risky because the consequences of election iss will affect their future! It’s very risky because the consequences of elections will affect their future!

It’s veryHowever, this is risky because the consequence of election iselection outcome will affect their future! However, this is risky because the election outcome will affect their future!

outcome rather than consequence

It’s very risky because the consequences of election iswill affect their future! It’s very risky because the consequences of election will affect their future!

I wish the youngerth would go and participate in thisese two elections. I wish the youth would go and participate in these two elections.

I wish the younger generation would go and participate in thisese two elections. I wish the younger generation would go and participate in these two elections.

I wish threally hope younger go andvoters participate in thisese two elections. I really hope younger voters participate in these two elections.

I wishhope the younger generation go and participate in this two elections. I hope the younger generation go and participate in this two elections.

Hope is more natural here for specific future desires.