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Skiing ,part 1

At the end of January I'm going to skiing. Actually I go with a big company, that includes my younger brother, my mother and her partner, and three families. This will be my third occasion, and I'm waiting for this so much.

Earlier I had a little afraid of skiing because I think it can be dangerous. I saw some accidents. In my opinion the fear is a very useful, what's more necessary feeling, however in this case one will be never enjoying the ski if don't let it go this feeling.

Last year, when I was skiing on the first day, I had fallen so many times. The many "stand up" were so exhausted that I was being really tired. Therefore I thought, I should not to fall. I really tried to do my best, so I didn't fall at all. In spite of that it was one of the worst advice for myself. It had been a cramp in my right leg, hence I couldn't enjoy the skiing that day. It was not a pleasure, not a half a drop.

I've learnt a lot of these mistakes thus I hope it will be much better. On the last day i began enjoy skiing. I let myself to go faster. It seemed so easy and effortless. Now I trust in the same feeling, I really want to improve my technique and also enjoying the skiing.

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I saw some accidents.

I really tried to do my best, so I didn't fall at all.

I let myself to go faster.

It seemed so easy and effortless.

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At the end of January I'm going to skiing.


At the end of January, I'm going to skiing. At the end of January, I'm going skiing.

At the end of January I'm going to skiing. At the end of January I'm going skiing.

At the end of January I'm going to go skiing. At the end of January I'm going to go skiing.

Actually I go with a big company, that includes my younger brother, my mother and her partner, and three families.


Actually I'm going with a big company,group that includes my younger brother, my mother and her partner, and three other families. Actually I'm going with a big group that includes my younger brother, my mother and her partner, and three other families.

Actually, I go with a big company, thatlot of people, includesing my younger brother, my mother and her partner, and three other families. Actually, I go with a lot of people, including my younger brother, my mother and her partner, and three other families.

Actually, I'm going with a biglot of company, that includesing my younger brother, my mother and her partner, and three other families. Actually, I'm going with a lot of company, including my younger brother, my mother and her partner, and three other families.

This will be my third occasion, and I'm waiting for this so much.


This will be my third occasiontime (skiing), and I'm waiting for this so much. This will be my third time (skiing), and I'm waiting for this so much.

"I'm waiting for this so much" could be more elegantly stated as "I'm eagerly anticipating this trip", but that's purely style. I understand the latter

This will be my third occasiontime, and I'mve been waiting for this so muchfor so long. This will be my third time, and I've been waiting for this for so long.

This will be my third occasion, and I'm waiting fortime (skiing), and I looking forward to this so much. This will be my third time (skiing), and I looking forward to this so much.

Earlier I had a little afraid of skiing because I think it can be dangerous.


Earlier, I hadwas a little afraid of skiing because I thinkknew it canould be dangerous. Earlier, I was a little afraid of skiing because I knew it could be dangerous.

In the next sentence, you talk about the danger.

Earlier, I hadwas a little afraid of skiing because I thinkought it canould be dangerous. Earlier, I was a little afraid of skiing because I thought it could be dangerous.

Earlier I hadI was a little afraid of skiing before because I think it canought it would be dangerous. I was a little afraid of skiing before because I thought it would be dangerous.

I saw some accidents.


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In my opinion the fear is a very useful, what's more necessary feeling, however in this case one will be never enjoying the ski if don't let it go this feeling.


In my opinion, the fear is a very useful, what's more necessary feeling, however in this case. However, one will be never enjoying the ski if skiing if they don't let it go of it (this feeling). In my opinion, the fear is a very useful. However, one will never enjoy skiing if they don't let go of it (this feeling).

In my opinion the, fear is acan be very useful, what's more, a necessary feeling, however in this case, one will be never enjoying the ski if they don't let it gogo of this feeling. In my opinion, fear can be very useful, what's more, a necessary feeling, however in this case, one will never enjoy the ski if they don't let go of this feeling.

In my opinion the fear is a very useful, what's more necessary feeling, however in this case; however one will be never be able to enjoying the skiing if they don't let it go of this feeling. In my opinion the fear is a very useful; however one will be never be able to enjoy the skiing if they don't let it go of this feeling.

Last year, when I was skiing on the first day, I had fallen so many times.


Last year, when I was skiing on the first day, I had fallenfell so many times. Last year, when I was skiing on the first day, I fell so many times.

Last year, when I was skiing, on the first day, I had fallenfell so many times. Last year, when I was skiing, on the first day, I fell so many times.

Last year, when I was skiing on the first day, I had fallenfell so many times. Last year, when I was skiing on the first day, I fell so many times.

The many "stand up" were so exhausted that I was being really tired.


The many "stand up" were so exhausted that I was being really tiredI was exhausted from standing back up so often. I was exhausted from standing back up so often.

The first part of this sentence doesn't seem to translate well, unfortunately. :(

The many "stand up"s were so exhausteding that I was begetting really tired. The many "stand up"s were so exhausting that I was getting really tired.

The many "stand up" were soStanding up so many times was exhausted thating and I was begetting really tired. Standing up so many times was exhausting and I was getting really tired.

Therefore I thought, I should not to fall.


Therefore I thought, "I should not stop fall.ing." Therefore I thought, "I should stop falling."

Therefore, I thought, I should not to fall. Therefore, I thought, I should not fall.

Therefore, I thought, I should not stop falling. Therefore, I thought I should stop falling.

I really tried to do my best, so I didn't fall at all.


I really tried to do my best, so I diwouldn't fall at all. I really tried to do my best, so I wouldn't fall at all.

"didn't" implies that it worked. :P But the following sentences show that that's not the case

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In spite of that it was one of the worst advice for myself.


In spite of that it was one of the worst advice forI could have given myself. In spite of that it was the worst advice I could have given myself.

In spite of that, it was onsome of the worst advice for myself. In spite of that, it was some of the worst advice for myself.

In spite of that, it was onsome of the worst advice for myself. In spite of that, it was some of the worst advice for myself.

It had been a cramp in my right leg, hence I couldn't enjoy the skiing that day.


It had been got a cramp in my right leg, hence I couldn't enjoy the skiing that day. I got a cramp in my right leg, hence I couldn't enjoy skiing that day.

ItThere had been a cramp in my right leg, henceand because of that I couldn't enjoy the skiing that day. There had been a cramp in my right leg, and because of that I couldn't enjoy skiing that day.

It had been a cramp in my right leg, hence I couldn't enjoy the skiing that day. I had a cramp in my right leg, hence I couldn't enjoy skiing that day.

It was not a pleasure, not a half a drop.


It was not a pleasure, not a half a dropeven half a drop of pleasure. It was not even half a drop of pleasure.

It was not a pleasure, not a half a dropeven a bit. It was not a pleasure, not even a bit.

It was not a pleasure, not even a half a drop. It was not a pleasure, not even a half a drop.

I've learnt a lot of these mistakes thus I hope it will be much better.


I've learnted a lot ofrom these mistakes, thus I hope it will be much better. I've learned a lot from these mistakes, thus I hope it will be much better.

This sentence is a little confusing, it sounds like the end of the story

I've learnt from a lot of these mistakes, thus I hope it will be much better. I've learnt from a lot of these mistakes, thus I hope it will be much better.

I've learnt a lot ofrom these mistakes, thus I hope it will be much better (this time). I've learnt a lot from these mistakes, thus I hope it will be much better (this time).

On the last day i began enjoy skiing.


On the last day i, I began to enjoy skiing. On the last day, I began to enjoy skiing.

On the last day i, I began to enjoy skiing. On the last day, I began to enjoy skiing.

On the last day i, I began enjoy skiing. On the last day, I began enjoy skiing.

I let myself to go faster.


I let myself to go faster. I let myself go faster.

I let myself to go faster. I let myself go faster.

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It seemed so easy and effortless.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now I trust in the same feeling, I really want to improve my technique and also enjoying the skiing.


Now I trust in the sameat feeling,. I really want to improve my technique and also enjoying the skiing. Now I trust in that feeling. I really want to improve my technique and also enjoying skiing.

Trust in the feeling of it being easy and effortless instead of being afraid?

Now I trust in thethat same feeling, I really want to improve my technique and also enjoying the skiing. Now I trust that same feeling, I really want to improve my technique and also enjoy skiing.

Now that I trust in theat same feeling, I really want to improve my technique and also enjoying the skiing. Now that I trust in that same feeling, I really want to improve my technique and also enjoy the skiing.

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