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All of us might have a moment that yearning to shout just to vent,and maybe so do the players.It’s just because the win and loss in the game that leads this form of vent to a heated discussion.We all tend to describe the one with less words or silent as calm and collected,while those with inconsistent external emotional expression are regarded to be rude.

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All of us might have a moment that yearningwhere we want to shout just to vent, and maybe so do athe playerletes.

It’s just because the wins and losses in the game that leads to this form of venting, or to a heated discussion.

We all tend to describe the ones with less words or silent as calm and collected, while those with inconsistent external emotional expression are regarded to beas rude.

The ones with less words or silent --> it would be more natural to just say "quiet people"

help me with my English writing


hHelp me with my English writing

All of us might have a moment that yearning to shout just to vent,and maybe so do the players.


All of us might have a moment that yearningwhere we want to shout just to vent, and maybe so do athe playerletes.

It’s just because the win and loss in the game that leads this form of vent to a heated discussion.


It’s just because the wins and losses in the game that leads to this form of venting, or to a heated discussion.

We all tend to describe the one with less words or silent as calm and collected,while those with inconsistent external emotional expression are regarded to be rude.


We all tend to describe the ones with less words or silent as calm and collected, while those with inconsistent external emotional expression are regarded to beas rude.

The ones with less words or silent --> it would be more natural to just say "quiet people"

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