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Aug. 16, 2025

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5 Years Diary

It has passed a year and a half years since I started taking a 5 years diary. I have been writing something happened everyday from the day after breaking up with my ex-girlfriend. The purpose of this diary is memorizing the way to find my next girlfriend and get married. Though I was not so nervous because I decided to break with her, I was anxious about the time given my age. 5 years is considered as reasonable time limit for marriage.
Just recently I met a new girlfriend. I kept in my mind to do my best to maintain the good relationship with her rather than feeling as excited as I did in my 20s. When I love someone so much, she may not feel the same way about me. There are still things I don't know well about her personality and way of thinking, but for now, I believe that she would be a best partner.

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5OPTION A: A Five Years Diary
OPTION B: A Five Year Marker

OPTION B is more vivid than OPTION A.

ItOPTION A: Five years hasve passed a year and a half yearssince I started my English diary. ¶
OPTION B: Five years have passed since I started taking a 5 years diary.ing my English diary entries here.

I ha've been writing something happened everyday from the day afterabout daily events since breaking up with my ex-girlfriend.

The purpose of this diary is memorizing the way to find my next girlfriend and get marriedMORE NATURALLY: My hope is that this will be a way to find a future spouse.

Though I was not so nervous because I decided to break with her, I was anxious about the time given my age.[MEANING UNCLEAR] 元の日本語の文章を含めていただければ、意味を解読できます。英語だけでは意味が不明瞭です。

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Aug. 17, 2025

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Thank you for correcting me.
I bought a diary for five years, and 1.5 years have passed since starting entries. The purpose is not finding a way to find a future spouse, but recording the activity until the marriage.
I was not upset about breaking with my ex-girlfriend because she had a problem. However, I have to be in a hurry as I am in my 30s.

5 Years Diary

5OPTION A: A Five Years Diary
OPTION B: A Five Year Marker

OPTION B is more vivid than OPTION A.

It has passed a year and a half years since I started taking a 5 years diary.

ItOPTION A: Five years hasve passed a year and a half yearssince I started my English diary. ¶
OPTION B: Five years have passed since I started taking a 5 years diary.ing my English diary entries here.

I have been writing something happened everyday from the day after breaking up with my ex-girlfriend.

I ha've been writing something happened everyday from the day afterabout daily events since breaking up with my ex-girlfriend.

The purpose of this diary is memorizing the way to find my next girlfriend and get married.

The purpose of this diary is memorizing the way to find my next girlfriend and get marriedMORE NATURALLY: My hope is that this will be a way to find a future spouse.

Though I was not so nervous because I decided to break with her, I was anxious about the time given my age.

Though I was not so nervous because I decided to break with her, I was anxious about the time given my age.[MEANING UNCLEAR] 元の日本語の文章を含めていただければ、意味を解読できます。英語だけでは意味が不明瞭です。

5 years is considered as reasonable time limit for marriage.

Just recently I met a new girlfriend.

I kept in my mind to do my best to maintain the good relationship with her rather than feeling as excited as I did in my 20s.

When I love someone so much, she may not feel the same way about me.

There are still things I don't know well about her personality and way of thinking, but for now, I believe that she would be a best partner.

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